that made me cry I’m so worried for them

update soon my goodness!

Joder, primero: me encanta leer a Naruto cuando era un niño pequeño, tu estilo de escritura me transmite la ternura de ese Naruto, y cuando conoció a Konohamaru... Hermoso momento en que dos hombres de conocen y formarán un lazo muy grande.

Con el capitulo final... Naruto sacrificando su integridad para proteger a sus compañeros, el recuerdo de "jiji" dandole a Naruto el valor de actuar por lo que es correcto (para lo que sabe de como es el Hokage). Y me sorprende que la primera en reaccionar para ayudar al herido rubio es nada más y nada menos que la tímida Hinata, se supone que para ese entonces ella ya admira al rubio ¿No? ¿Será esto un impulso en sus sentimientos para el futuro?.

Puedo imaginar que Naruto, o conoce al Kyūbi, o forma un lazo con los niños después de que estos le preguntan el por qué de su actuar, trayendo a colación la respuesta a la pregunta de Shikamaru de por qué Naruto quiere ser Hokage...

Espero el siguiente capítulo. Te has ganado otro seguidor. Buen trabajo.

PD: ¿Por qué consideras que Hanabi debería ser un poco más mayor? ¿Para que esté en la generación de Konohamaru?

Oh..que ansiedad! Necesito saber como sigue!
Por favor, por favorcito?!
Me encanta este fic, lo encontré hoy y ya me leí los 12 capítulos de una vez jaja..espero que lo puedas actualizar pronto.
Cuando kakashi se enteré va a correr sangre! :)
Gracias por compartir

I started crying when Naruto called Minato his daddy. Bless you.

This chapter was soo forced, im gonna drop it here, not worth it anymore.

It was going so well. So well. Wonderfully written, exceptional character interaction, awesome pay-offs.

I just cannot read further than that. When a bad story uses some non-sensical cliché, it is expected. It doesn't make it worse given that it's already terrible. You are already at the bottom of the barrel.

But when a good story like yours use such a terrible excuse of an asspull, it's like seeing a soaring eagle being shot to the ground in a formless heap. It's a heart-wrenching vision. Like a towering house of cards crumbling because of one mistake.

Yes, that is exactly what this "Konoha is a windmill, please feel free to enter and abduct clan heirs" plot-line is. A terrible mistake.

I do not even care what awesomeness will possibly follow. It simply happened at the cost of my suspension of disbelief and as such, I'm out.

Best writing,

This was a good return chatpter of a well executed story. Don't review much as I'm rarely left with anything to say but this is a really good story and I'm happy it and you are back.

Hey dude, your education takes precedence over this story. Take your time, do well in school, I'm just glad your writing this story.

I accept your apology. As shy blue eyes looked
apology." As shy

and then you're gonna make me Hokage. The blond leapt
Hokage." The blond

and payed no attention
paid
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There were two typos back in a chapter I accidentally erased the notes for. O well. "it's leader" and something else.
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Interesting story. I like slow-burns. But judging by the update trajectory, this story has a long way to go. O well.
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Thank you for the read.

he had been caught nearly a full hour before the anyone else and it had been
before anyone else

This way, he silver-haired teen could
the silver-haired

Great story, quality writing like this has all but disappeared from this site. I do agree with ZabZab and slimr3 though, Your story is most likely going to lose people if you keep it at a slow burn like this. Otherwise with 10 Chapters down and your foundation basically laid, I can't wait to see where you go with this. Good Job

The boy really didn't realize the impact he was with simple statements like that.
he has

"Inu can hear us, so we have to be quiet.
quiet."

Knowing what Naruto's childhood was like in the manga, having a chance to get to know the Third Hokage and just be the center of his attentions and stories led to some sweet moments captured for the infamous hyperactive ninja. Thanks for sharing!