I love this! i cried so much when prim died again. I had no ideia that your intention was to send Katniss back to her own time, it was definetily a diferent twist in the "back in time" ideia. I have to say, it was obvious Peeta was the owner of the restaurant in the first chapter and i just kept getting really antsy watching the clues that he wasnt going to have that dream fullfiled again. when he mentioned going to Italy for a year I was like: "there you go, they are going to have that year apart from each other and only get together when he comes back" and then he decided to postpone for another year and I was like: "oh no, oh no" LOL the same with the moment she said they bought the apartament with the money his granny left, I was certain in another life where he didnt have Katniss he would have opened his restaurant. While Katniss helped herself and the friends she knew before to fullfil theyr dreams and regrets, she unkownly frustrated Peeta's dreams and that was a little sad.

the grief she had for Hunter was heartbreaking, the moment she decide to use that condom, it didnt matter if she and gale had had sex for another ten years, it wouldnt be Hunter. and it doesnt matter how much you love a spouse, your child is always meant to mean more to you, be even more loved. losing Peeta was sad, but it made sense that she was willing to not have him in her life if she could have Hunter.

I really like how it all turn out, thank you for this fic!

A nice plot

Loved this!

Your story is very good, I really enjoyed your story but in my personal opinion, I think this story could work better as 2 different stories, one with the alternate timeline, exploring that almost perfect life of katniss, maybe focusing on the mourning phase for the death of prim, and another story with the original line with Katniss facing divorce leading the process of improvement and acceptance while she learns to accept that her life was that miserable in part because of her and learning to improve yourself and lead the life that she always wanted to lead, but as I said it's just my personal opinion and I really enjoyed your story

Wow awesome concept!

I really enjoyed this crazy, mixed up AU of yours. I'll admit, as a mother I was a bit surprised how little the 'loss' of Hunter seemed to weigh on her, but I see it was all endgame. Kudos! Loved it!

This was amazing I laughed I cried it was just a wonderful read

Great story! Everything is right where it’s supposed to be. You could have gone further with everything and written about Katniss and Peeta getting married and having kids. Also with Gale and Madge having kids. I want to see Rye end up with someone, and there is so much more to write about. Thank you for a very well written story!

Nooo ! that was so cute, heartbreaking and happy at the same time. I really was sad to know that Prim could not flee from his destiny in what was the dream or his parallel life, but on the other hand I really liked the fact that Katniss returned to her original life and faced everything that was happening , especially next to Huner and what made my heart even happier was that despite everything she and Peeta coincided in this life too, that was a wonderful ending. Thank you for sharing this story, you have a lot of talent to keep them waiting, I will miss this story and these beloved characters. :D

It has potential, but the first chapter just seemed to drag on. It also sounds so very British. I'm assuming you are British and that's why, but since the characters are American, it's kind of jarring.

Loved the last chapter but also sad that this story is done. I liked how things turned out, and that Katniss was brought back to her original life because it was really where she ought to be. Also glad that hate feelings towards Gale and Madge are set aside and that both couples are happily back together. Great story, would definitely reread it someday again️

Kudos
Look forward to the next story.

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story from start to finish, thank you! I must say, I was surprised that Gale and Madge weren't together by the epilogue, but it does make sense, especially considering Madge and Katniss's relationship. And I'm glad Gale was a little put out at first by Peeta's presence in katniss's life (that's the vindictive side if me. Lol), but that he soon got over it. Very satisfying ending and epilogue.

Awwwww. Amazing ending.

Hello there,
I have read a lot of Everlark and your story belongs to my own list of the best ones. Congratulations! I hope you find some inspiration to write another one again