Albedo wouldn't turn in the legendary super yandere as long as Ainz just gives her a bone. Hell, Shalltear and her only really argue on who the first wife is supposed to be. She just REALLY loves him. Creepily so.

This is probably what Ainz would act like if none of Suzuki Satoru's memories or personality remained. A heartless, calculating, extremely evil overlord. The dialogue brilliantly explores this alternative character, and it would be great to see how such a being would change the course of the story.

Excelente trabajo, incluso Maruyama, lo cita en el volumen 13, felicidades, espero puedas escribir más

Amazing. only question though: Why are they calling him Momon?

I've wanted to say this for a while, but you are my favorite writer on this site. I shouldn't gush over other stories on a review of this story... So let's gush over your mastery of tale-telling here! Everyone felt perfectly in character, it was delightfully crafted and the way you had our Overlord bring Demiurge around is both beautiful and possibly the only way it could be done- even as Demiurge's submission was so deeply ingrained into him that it caught Ainz by surprise, a beautiful touch.
Your ability to spin a phrase is such that I can't help but break out quotes from you (such as what is 'the height of artifice' and in one case how it applies to King of Dragon Pass) when I want to say something appropriately profound, and it's all wrapped up in a rollicking fun ride! A pleasure to read your writing and absorb your ideas as best I can, time and again. Thank you for sharing your writing with us; I and many others are glad to have you here.

Now, off to read another tale! (Catching up on the latest-updated one of yours.)

I liked the one-shot!

Lmao, ooooh the twists and turns in this... however Ainz, you know you just have to do one thing for Albedo :3

Well, if you do write an Overlord SI, judging by this it's bound to be amazing.

this was awesome i love how he spoke to demiurge.
his charcter was awesome i was smiling trough all of it, and the last bit when he said how to get albedo
less creepy that was so him.
from a new fan that love overlord manga anime and novel.
have a nice day.
:D

Holy shit! This, THIS right here is how momonga should be acting. More controlled, less bumbling and vague and with a little a bit of dry humor towards his lesser pr friendly servants.

Awesome!

One word AWESOME! This was a beautiful, beautiful rendition of context that well and truly provided a definition of evil I have never seen prior to this. Enjoyed this to my heart's content. I am definitely looking forward to more fanfiction

Wow , this was great.

Doubtlessly, among the best Overlord fanfictions.

Somewhere near the middle, you have accidentally changed the point of view, and it may sometimes be a tad confusing about who the narrator is, but even then... you did a very good job.

This fucking guy...this FUCKING guy! *starts clapping* Inspiring!