Can’t wait for more.

Rebekah having a lover...I'm in lol

Can’t wait for more

Great chapter. The only thing is it doesn't make sense Alex is a hybrid but is scared of the sun, I thought the sun doesn't effect hybrids. Plz update soon.

If Alex is hybrid how can the sun burn her. Please update soon.

So Alex is a hybrid.

Looking good so far.

Great chapter. I wonder what the other originals will be like when they see a hybrid that is not created by Klaus. Plz update soon.

Okay my one complaint is why you are not using a comma (,)
There are way to many periods in here, It makes the reading VERY chopped up.

Also there might be a little too much detail as far as explaining how she sets the key down to use for later is a great example of this, it's completely unnecessary.
I'm confused on how your last rewrite of this was actually pretty decent you have changed up your writing style but that still doesn't explain away not using a comma and instead using a period.
I very much enjoyed this story and want to like this new one you have made but that's hard with the punctuation mistakes.