Reviews for Sasori
wolfey141 chapter 6 . 12/16/2019
i am now eagerly waiting for amy to die at taylors hands. cuz your turned taylor in to this universes coil
SanatanaSociety chapter 1 . 8/25/2018
I’m very intrigued by this story so far. I can’t wait to delve into the future chapters. You write very well.
Dragonmonsterkiller chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
So she has the abilities of the bug guy from Toriko.

Is this foreshadowing?
Ransworn chapter 6 . 7/19/2018
Oh Amy, you need to go down. Like, in flames.
Good at being a gang lord? Cool. I hope she lost herself pretending (if even) so the first bullet between the eyes is more satisfying. Artillery bombardment, though ideal, just wouldn't be the same.
The PRT and Brigade are even more hilariously useless for completely believable reasons.
The trusting Lisa with everything immediately doesn't make sense though. Unless of course Lisa's power told her to admit to her power to gain trust. Then it makes complete sense. But that'd just set the stage for Taylor completely falling for anyone's story including Amy's no matter how fabricated. Maybe someday Taylor will be less terrible at people. Maybe someday.
shadows-haunt-angels chapter 1 . 6/22/2018
Honestly really like this. Please keep it up!
Guest chapter 4 . 6/2/2018
I get that you're trying to do something different with Amy here but there's no way someone like her would be tolerated regardless of how many people she healed after EB fights. That was just grimdark for the sake of being grimdark.
Morbious20 chapter 6 . 6/1/2018
Good story, personally I wish it hadn't gone so dark so quickly but hopefully that just means Taylor will get free and clear just as quickly.
Gon Freaks chapter 6 . 5/24/2018
fuck, you make a fucked up world even worse.
slicedtoad chapter 5 . 5/1/2018
This chapter was quite good and I'm very interested in where the plot is going. I still think the previous chapter was a touch too extreme, but with this chapter, my expectations for the rest of the fic are much higher than they were.
Videocrazy chapter 5 . 5/1/2018
It's called the Corona Gemma, not the Corona Gema. Also, I found it really hard to tell who was actually talking between Lisa and Taylor.
shugokage chapter 5 . 4/30/2018
Interesting scene and chapter!
Slacker99 chapter 4 . 4/25/2018
Wow! I wonder how much of the Lady's behavior is just her being that twisted, or if some of that could be her playing up her "cape persona" to cower the new trigger so that she (Taylor) will go along with everything.
If this happened during the week do they know how young Taylor is? Could cause some interesting situations if they think she's old enough to be in collage. (among other things)
Good news, Taylor's not going to have nightmares about the locker anymore. Bad news, she's got someone much worse to dream about now. Can you say "vivisection"?
What does Marquis think about his daughters experiments on defenseless girls?

Poor Taylor. The Lady managed to do in 1 1/2 minutes what took the 3 witches 1 1/2 years to accomplish. She broke Taylor. Something that I think Taylor saw as a personal failing. After all when her mother died she persevered. When Emma betrayed her she persevered. For 1 1/2 years of bullying she persevered, until the locker that is.
Since Taylor's still learning what her powers are capable of will she understand how the second trigger has affected her powers?
Between her at home schooling, new "job", poor self image, trust issues, run ins with the 3 witches, (you know it's going to happen at least once), training her powers, expanding her DNA data to be more lethal, trying and most likely failing to avoid the attention of the Lady, and the Lady's hands off her organs, Taylor's going to be stressed beyond belief. Makes me wonder if a 3rd trigger might be in her future. (?Khepri? like transformation)

For now though I guess she'll keep her head down and let them thinks she's adjusting to life in a gang, and being a good little minion. Of course this is Taylor were talking about, so we'll see how long that lasts.
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 4 . 4/23/2018
wow...love the plot twist
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 3 . 4/23/2018
Go Taylor
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 2 . 4/23/2018
Great Chapter!
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