Reviews for Pure Instincts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() nooo luffy. Dragon must be so worried. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't quite think it has sunk in Luffy disappeared yet hahaha... Poor slaves group or whoever they are. Not sure whats worse. Dealing with Puffy for a couple hours or being found by a pissed off Dragon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story it keeps me interested and I can't wait for you to write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh gosh.. this is precious, i like Female Luffy Story.. and this is One of them. please keep going. Like your works |
![]() ![]() jjajajajaa, no me habia reido asi en mucho tiempo |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how Dragon is a doting father. Please continue. |
![]() ![]() Can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() Nice chap I'm really excited to see another chap |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay the story flow is a little choppy and confusing but it really seems like a great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() if you could break the big blocks of texts into chunks of paragraphs it'd be ten times easier to read. |