this story made me cry with sadness and happiness. wow thank you so much for this. its so good for Susan to be led back to a slam (aka Christ) and get a happy ending. this made me so happy

this chapter made me cry with sadness and ha

wow that was an amazing use of a word

this was a good chapter

This was wonderful! And so different from most Narnia stories on this site - it wasn’t fun reading about all my favorite people messing up, but now they seem more real than they were before. Thank you! I especially loved the last chapter. You wrote Susan exactly as I’d ever imagined her.

I really enjoyed this fanfiction! I thought it was well written and totally in line with C.S. Lewis’ characterizations of the Pevensies and the intention of his writing :)

Enjoyed your story.

I loved this! Honestly it felt just like C.S. Lewis writing, you had the same tone and such and if I hadn't know it was fanfic I would have honestly thought it was a few short stories written by him! I loved the hyenas little no king bit as it made me think of Lion King, but my favorite thing was Susan's chapter. I always hated that she had forgotten and that we never really learned if she ever remembered so this was a nice tie up of that loose end. Well done!

I read many Susan redemption story on this website and the chapter is definitely one of the best:) the conversion between Susan and Father John was brilliantly done. The was also brilliant how the drawing of Aslan looked disappointed then happy, a great ending to this wounderful story.

Goosebumps!
I loved the redemption of Susan!
I also liked how you portrayed Lucy’s failure/testing in England too - so accurate to her character.
Happy Easter!

Holy moly, I am LOVING these sibling one shots. They are perfectly in line with canon characterisation and yet magnified. You’ve done so well writing Aslan!
I also love the gospel light you’ve written them in. It’s very true to His Word and the mercy that Christ shows us. Thank you!

i am a little confused about this chapter
is about the relationship before marriage or something more?

Hello Ms. Lions, it has been quite a while(for me at least).
I saw you posted this(in Spanish class) and am supposed to be reviewing my 1864 vocabulary words for the NSE, however, I decided a detour to Narnia, as it never hurt anyone. Narnia always held a special place in my heart(as it prooobably does everyone).
Edmund being the judge of Narnia(at first) is a terrifying thought...as he's an 11 year old kid... but as I read on, I realized that he has been through so much already, and is still learning, that he would turn out fine. Was there no jury for the trial? That's a lot to put solely on the shoulders of a child. However, I wish I had an Peter and an Aslan in my life, because together, they make Edmund a better person, despite his previous faults.
Anyways, I've rambled on enough. I look forward to reading more.
Your constantly over-tried Gryffindork.

Wow that was really good.