Reviews for A Friend in Need
Frost Glaive chapter 8 . 9/5/2019
Nice! Was quite funny; I appreciated it. Thanks for the enjoyable read!
EtheriousQueen777 chapter 8 . 8/8/2019
That's adorable, so sweet. Great job!
91Silver chapter 8 . 2/12/2019
I love that he actually got the T-shirt, to funny.
RinnaS chapter 8 . 1/1/2019
Wonderful story, thank you!
Elriqeira chapter 1 . 5/19/2018
Aw man I really liked this story, I wish it could be longer! I love how Prompto was so loyal to Noctis and tried to help him even though Noctis is such a troll! Although, I would have liked for them to have come across something scary or challenging in the sewers rather than just getting lost. Maybe the final boss could have been down in the sewers or something. Even if they wouldn't have fought it, having to run from it would have been interesting. Nonetheless this was a fantastic story that I'm glad to have stumbled across.
Ariels Lament chapter 8 . 5/19/2018
I am so late! But I’ve made it. And it’s over now. T.T

Did I tell you before how much I love this? Because I do. I almost died laughing when Prompto brought up the ‘return to entrance’ spell. So hilarious, and so very Prompto! And Noct’s teasing, all the way up to the very end, was perfect. For a bit I was beginning to wonder if they’d somehow managed to find themselves outside of Insomnia, but I guess with all the circling around they were doing, I really should have known better. :P

Cor chastising Regis cracked me up, too. Particularly with Prompto right there and so confused on how to act with the king in his home.

Thanks for sharing this gem with us, and sorry I’m so late reviewing again. ;
omasuoniwabanshi chapter 8 . 5/15/2018
Cute ending! Prompto comes across as so very endearingly young in this chapter. The funny PJs, his awe at his houseguests, and his reaction to the prince's joke gift were all textbook teen. I'm so glad that you included a wrap up chapter after the main action of the story was done. Getting the king and Noctis in the same room was a hoot, especially since Prompto had no clue about the etiquette (and length of time) of a proper bow. Guess they don't teach that in school!
Thank you for a thoroughly enjoyable story.
Soud chapter 8 . 5/14/2018
Oh that was so great! I am so happy that you wrote another FFXV Fanfic with such an interesting theme. Fanfics about friendships are so rare. I treat them like treasures. The whole time I read this I imaged the Crestholm Channels (one of my favorite Dungeon with one of the best lines of the bros! XD)
It is perfect and I love the idea of Promptos Shirt.
I hope we will see more of your work. D
HibinoMirai chapter 8 . 5/14/2018
Yes! What I've been waiting all day for!
...
And it's the end!?
Now I don't know if I should feel sad or happy anymore. I'm leaning towards sad right now.
Also...

"His nice and comfortable version of reality had been shattered and thrown out the window."

I'm warning you now, I am totally gonna quote you on this.
Also YES Noctis is a real troll. But we all love him anyway.1

Thank you so much for this story!

P.S. Do you have anything new planned yet?
Mrs. Knightley chapter 8 . 5/14/2018
I loved this story! You rounded it off so well! The inter actions between the various characters was really well written. The interaction between the king and his son was a nice insight into
that relationship. The playful father son interaction was really nice. Prompto’s reactions to his house guests was nicely written. I feel for the kid every time you write him I just feel sorry for him and his antics. He’s such a mess! I loved the comparison of magic use as the the size of the fire balls. Very cute and funny. You have a perfect blend of the warm fuzzies and the funny entertaining. Really well done. And you round it all up at the end with a prank from the prince. It was cute it was enjoyable it was a perfect ending to your story. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing and sharing your talent with the world!
TooEasilyDistracted chapter 8 . 5/14/2018
This was a really fun read. I loved Noctis' trolling and the interaction between Cor and Prompto was especially good.
Misaki Murakami chapter 8 . 5/14/2018
Oh wow, love the ending! That's so awesome! Please keep writing and congratz for finishing! :D
Bluepaw265 chapter 7 . 5/13/2018
And so the wild journey comes to an end. Well, the sewer thing, anyway.
Next chapter will be about the check-ups and stuff, right? Prompto is going to be GLORIOUS!
Can't wait to see what you write next!
omasuoniwabanshi chapter 7 . 5/10/2018
Poor Prompto! I'd be ticked off too is someone made light of my terror! But I have to admit, the humor of the leaky pipe had to be well nigh irresistible to Noctis, and the crack about the 'needing a plumber' was classic.
There was a lot to love about this chapter. The expression about 'fortune smiling' on Noctis made me smile, because I haven't heard it in a while.
I also smiled over the "Do you even have hot chocolate?" "Is there anyone who doesn't" interchange. As far as I'm concerned, hot chocolate is a staple for the pantry - you never know when the weather is going to turn cold and you're going to crave it.
Prompto's incredulity over Noctis not realizing that you can run out of hot water was a great way to emphasize the difference in social status between the too, but the earlier exchange between them where Noctis apologizes for making fun of Prompto, with such sincerity showed true friendship between them. I enjoyed every bit of this chapter - right up to the 'This was going to be a long drive'. I don't envy Cor at all.
Mrs. Knightley chapter 6 . 5/7/2018
Prompto is quite the character. He is comical but endearing I guess. He has intense emotions. He all the way whatever he is feeling. Enthusiastic and upbeat or at least attempting to be. Nervous and scared. Panicked and a worrier. That sounds like an exhausting way to live! But you capture him well. The scorch marks on the wall is a good idea! Brilliant way to keep track and mark time passage for the reader. Then we come to the slippery pipe stretching across nothingness. Of course they will try it and there goes Noct. :) nice bit of added drama. I love the description of his magic. I have not seen much of the game but I gives a good mental picture regardless. Nicely written. Poor Prompto. Such a nervous wreck. Of course watching your friend fall in to the abyss will do that for most people. So they are going to spit up. That sounds like more bad things to come! You’re such a ff writer! Abandon the scare-dy cat in the dark. So mean of you! Nice chapter nice suspense and believable trouble for your characters to face. Another chapter feels ell written! Good job!
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