Listened to the song in preparation for this read. It's awesome! Some song fics are so poorly written, but now this one. It has so much meaning in it, and really draws power from the lyrics. Also gotta love that "Ninja never quit!" at the end. Great fic!

AHHH

SPIRIT MUSIC! LOVE THAT U PUT IT IN HERE!
Srsly i lovee that movie so much XD

I love the Spirit music in this!

ok
i loved this

Aw, geez... my eyes are a little watery. This was REALLY good. Usually fics that tie into songs are tied loosely, but this one was done really well, I think. You captured Lloyd's heartbreak and sorrow, that's for sure. ;-;

My only note is that you spelled PIXAL's name wrong again (or autocorrect tried to "fix" it for you and you didn't notice). Other than that, this seemed flawless (except for the fact that my heart is breaking) X"D

This season is truly one of the darkest but more amazing. No doubt that Lloyd would have trouble dealing with their deaths (though hopefully Mistake will tell them about the tea she gave Jay. Likely, she might be separated from then in all the chaos).

Inspiration is pretty hard to come by. Some of the best advice I learned was talking with fellow writers or fans. Bouncing ideas can really helps give and develop some inspiration or motivation, depending.