I knew it! I knew it! Thank you for this update! :D

I have a strong feeling that Pridak will screw themselves over. (I also hated the Barraki, you are not alone in there). I'm very curious to see where this all will go. Or what that "Valwahi" place is...

Ooohh... I have an idea who the Mahri-Nui Makuta might be! :D Even without him being an actual Makuta. Does it start with a "Pr"? Or maybe a "Ta"? Pr would make more sense, he was the assistant of my favorite Makuta once.

Another great fight scene! I'm really liking all these specialized Rahkshi.

This was a grea start. Even better than the last one of yours I read, with Vhisola. Am I correct in assuming the Toa of Fire who told the legend is Vakama?

Antroz seems like a bit of a cruel authoritarian. I approve of Krika much more! I’m sure that will change shortly, however.

I might go back and read the prequel you mentioned.

Consider me hooked, good sir.

An actual fanfic that does justice to my favorite idiotic bunch in the whole Bionicle-universe, the Makuta (even if alternate ones), WHILE having a nice and interesting story, WHILE fitting together given and made-up details, WHILE having good dialogue written everyhwere.

One day, I may reach this level of awesomeness. Until then, I'm just glad I have found a story like this here. :) Thank you for making it! I'll keep tabs on it, should a new update come.

P.S.: I hope Icarax will make an appearance. Definitely my favorite guy, along with Krika. It would be most interesting to see what he would be in this world.

The emotion you put in this story is incredible; better than any other bionicle fanfic (and probably official) story I've read. Please take your time and continue to make this story as amazing as it has been so far.

The plot thickens! I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm actually learning more Bionicle lore by reading this (especially about the Great Beings), which is very exciting.

I didn't know about this story before I gave you my review for The Gargoyle Knight. I couldn't be happier to see the story continued. :)