Reviews for Miss Redacted
geekqueen2010 chapter 16 . 6/1
I started crying as I read about Caroline calling Chell her "darling beauty" and such, just like the song flashbacked here but in English this time! I even mentally called Caroline "mom" though I'm not Chell. I have the extended version of Cara Mia Addio here on my phone so I played it while reading the flashback! I may be too emotionally involved in this game series, and by extension this fic.
geekqueen2010 chapter 13 . 6/1
I love this story so much! The return of Ley and Caroline is coming!
Briggers810 chapter 17 . 5/27
Just finished reading this, found it completely enjoyable... especially the idea of the WheatLey and Chell having previously met.

I would be interested in a sequel to this, if there's been one... as I realise it has been a few years since this was last updated.
Aster chapter 17 . 1/7
Absolutely delightful!
Wileybot chapter 17 . 11/13/2019
Wow...This story was amazing. Honestly this is amazing. Really seems it could be official in the same vain as the lab rat comics. My only wish is that i could forget the story and read it again. Finally a story without a bunch of self-insert OCs. 10/10 would read again
Guest chapter 17 . 9/9/2019
this was amazing thank you
Outasync chapter 17 . 2/23/2019
Thank you for a great story, featuring a non-romantic friendship. I enjoyed it very much, and will leave more detailed reviews on the chapters with my next read-through. Which will be soon!
calmlystressingout chapter 17 . 10/15/2018
I just reread Miss Redacted and,,, honestly? it's even better than I remembered :D
I reviewed before as a guest, but there's so much to say about this.. the storyline, the writing, they way everyone is depicted,, it's amazing! Especially Chell remembering everything, that must've made it so much harder for her.. but at the end everything turns out alright! Hopefully Cube will stay safe aksdjfh
And Wheatley's apology, when Chell gives up,, it's so heartfelt and sounds so sincere-
They saved Caroline in the end as well :D I wonder if GLaDOS is still there somewhere, pushed deep within,, ,something?

the only part i did not enjoy is that space core is dead now :( rip
Perfect Circumstance chapter 17 . 6/30/2018
Wow, that was powerful. The past connection between them... It's amazing. I'm kind of late but there's a LOT of fanfics out there and only so much time you can spend on your computer. :P

The descriptions are strong, and the memories have so much detail. All of the characters are well defined and written, and the pacing is perfect. Your plot line is intricate and well woven, and I am definitely going to favorite this.
g u e s t chapter 17 . 6/11/2018
This was a huge, yet wonderful ride of a story. I can't believe it reached 100k words, and then the ending so quickly ;v; Yet it was wonderfully paced, and I loved every moment of it!
I'm looking forward to your next stories, whether a sequel to this or something entirely new. Thank you, so much for writing Miss Redacted!
Guest chapter 17 . 6/9/2018
Bloody beautiful. I wish it were longer but I know it's perfect just this way (very much like the games). Simply marvelous.
Do not think for a second that I won't be taking a look at your profile and your other stories. I cannot express my love for this story enough.
It's hard to overstate my satisfaction. ;)
mochimogalina chapter 17 . 5/17/2018
I loved your fresh take on Portal! It's so fun to see everyone's stories and thoughts on the game's characters... so much potential. :D Keep up the great writing!
The Observer 2.O chapter 17 . 5/15/2018
It's been one hell of a ride but I must thank you for this incredible journey you've taken me and others through.

The narrative was superb, grammar and punctuation was pretty flawless (I barely saw any typos) and the story... Worthy of being Portal 3 for any Portal fan.

Send this as a script to Valve at once! :D

Again, thank you for the story. It was... a blast :)
offbrandbiscuit chapter 17 . 5/15/2018
Personally, I'd prefer this story to be stand-alone. We know they'll return to Aperture to rebuild it, so I personally would just leave it.
But, if you want to, that's fine!
For a first story, man alive (heheh) this was incredible! Very, very well done. Nicely finished as well.
Lady Isludis chapter 17 . 5/14/2018
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, and to be honest I hope you post the sequel here. I gotta know that there’s more!
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