Reviews for HP & The Jade Dragon: Part 2
keon.mcvay chapter 1 . 10/2
Using this to follow since i apparently didnt make sure i had it checked
keon.mcvay chapter 4 . 9/26
Please please please tell me that this isnt a dead story and you plan on updating (soon hopefully)
CelebTil chapter 4 . 9/22
I hope your life improves, and your family's health improves as well. Don't let life get you down, I understand what it's like to deal with depression.

This is currently my favorite story on this site.
I would also just like to say that the description you put into your story is excellently done, enough to bring the locations and people to life without dragging or slowing down the pace of the story. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.
Please give my thanks to your friend and beta reader for their hard work.
THANK YOU for putting your time and effort into this story it shows in your writing how much work you do to bring us rabid readers each and every chapter. I apologize for all the nit pickers and nay sayers out there who don't appreciate what you do.
Thank you again for this wonderfully descriptive story.

Celeb'Til
Guciec chapter 4 . 9/18
New chapters awesome!
Liquidsnake867 chapter 1 . 7/10
I would literally murder my own mother for an update right now! ️
WithinTheMadness chapter 4 . 7/4
She's just as noble as he is.
She's got 2 Houses of her own, yet isn't taking advantage of that. Girl has integrity. Or has conveniently forgotten it, being caught in her own head. More likely the former.
Though, that'll likely be Ron's reasoning.
Just stating the obvious here. Been on my mind for 50 chapters.

I thought Amy was the Captain, when Sabre was promoted to Major? Why would she have her goons follow her sister? Is that part of her loyalty test for them? Or do the twins truly not know what the other is up to?
Good grief. Why do I get the feeling HP and HG are gonna inadvertently get dragged into opposing sides? Idk how, but just a weird feeling
Guest chapter 4 . 6/29
The usage of sex toys like magic dildos and bondage equipment seems a little excessive.
The only thing worse than that would be if you included scenes where actual tentacles or She-Male dicks were used.
Won’t this kinda defeat the purpose of it all, for whenever Harry hooks up with most of the girls?

Also, not to sound sexist or misogynistic, but don’t you think you’re going a little too far with the whole “girls ganging up on Harry and other guys”, “girl code”, and “Girls scheming behind the guy’s back to manipulate him” themes that have been appearing?
Honestly, it also seems kinda harsh in regards to Harry given all the hell he’s endured in the form of torture, betrayal, accusations, and manipulations, even if the last one was often claimed to be done “under the best of intentions”.
Yaw6113 chapter 4 . 7/1
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
sakruasucks chapter 4 . 6/29
ok so your fic is called harry potter and the jade dragon ... so when is there going to be a plot for the title ... so far it is all fluff and no really plot line
Guest chapter 4 . 6/28
I am actually okay with the top four witches getting to marry Harry. Though I do find it funny that even a hundred chapters later I would still prefer Daphne and Susan to be with him over what I think the main pairing is. Daphne, Susan, Hermione, and Fleur are cool.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/27
Seriously? Sex toys? I mean, it’s one thing to do some girl on girl action or some masturbation, but those specialized dildos, butt-plugs, and bondage equipment seem a bit...excessive.
I’m particularly worried if Harry ends up being the one tied up, because no one wants to see that due to how degrading and insensitive it is (since Harry has endured enough pain and torture to last a thousand lifetimes, coupled by the fact that he’s a natural dominant and doesn’t seem like the type to be interested to do bondage even if he’s the dominant).
And will the girls keep the sex toys even after starting relationships with Harry?
Because even if Harry has to end up splitting a lot of time between girls, it’s a little degrading and insulting that the girls would have to resort to said methods even after entering a serious relationship with Harry.
I mean, even if Harry doesn’t go full “sex god” on the girls, he should be more than enough to satisfy females without needing said sex toys.
These are questions you NEED to consider before going too far with this bondage/sex-toys/eccentric-sexual-fetish route.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/27
Is Harry ever going to get out of this stupid country? I'm sick on this crap!
Guest chapter 4 . 6/25
Glad u r back to continuing this story.
Nice to see that we seems to finally be done with the ridiculously juvenile “Truth or Dare” game and back to actual plot line material.
DxD-Supreme chapter 4 . 6/26
Quite the female-centric chapter, it was good nonetheless although it still seems kinda surprising at how much interest the girls are showing in this stuff.
I just hope you don’t use the bondage stuff as an excuse to make Harry more whipped or where HE is the one tied up.
Harry won’t survive if he ends up with multiple women with bondage fetishes that insist on them being the dominants.

I thought Kuzuko had a crush on Yoshi, not Ken or the other Master?
Hell, maybe she could give Harry a shot.

The increasing number of attractive new females showing a universal interest and attraction to Harry is NOT helping your case of the number of women who will SERIOUSLY end up in a relationship with Harry being kept to a small number.
I’m telling you, at this point you CANNOT keep the number of serious girlfriends/wives to simply 4-7 girls.
It would be extremely wasteful, disappointing, and shameful to put Harry with less than 10-12 girls at minimum, and I mean as SERIOUS relationships, not as one-night stands or temporary flings.
Harry seems like he can handle it, so do it.
IrishNewton chapter 4 . 6/25
Wow! Awesome chapter!
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