I really enjoyed this short story. You are a very talented writer. I'm looking forward to reading all of your Fifty shades based fanfics.

I love your stories and this was fabulous. Thanks for sharing...Denie'

Loved it!

Wow thanks for the very good read.

This was such a sweet storyline!

beautiful story, I liked a lot

oooo how beautiful. I liked it very much

damn bitch daughter
the monster is her

I like Ana.
and have if you believe at once.
and it will be fun to see these two live together

You asshole, I was very disappointed.
If Christian is going to see it, he deserves a good slap

how much passion I loved.
and I hope he does not leave

wow I like it a lot.
and how good that Christian cares about her

I like it .
is very interesting and you want to know why Christian is hiding

This chapter says it all with a little patience, some stubbornness on Anastasia part she found the love of her life in a man who didn’t trust anyone at first but learned to trust this beautiful woman with a warm heart. Loved reading this story thanks for writing it.

Christian has taken that big step going out in public not caring what people think and that’s a sign he’s coming out of his shell with the help of Anastasia Steele.