WOW, that was deep and insightful. I could almost imagine the scenario. Funtime Freddy all alone in a dark room, slowly going insane. That's a chilling image. It's sad that he was outcasted simply because of his eccentrics. The others' cruelty affected him so deeply. Baby and Ballora ingored him didn't they? They made him feel alone, and Funtime Foxy's insults probably did not help either. Bon Bon was really his only friend, the light to his darkness and insanity. His self-loathing was hard to read without tearing up.
One thing you can improve on this is to simply make it less chunky by making the paragraphs slightly smaller. Because as of reading this on a laptop, there are at least 10 lines filled with words in each paragraph. It looks crowded if you know what I mean. Perhapes if you separate the paragraphs further to about 5 or more paragraphs, it would look better.
That's all I have for you. Good job and continue the great work!
-GoldenPheonix25

So sad... :'(