Reviews for Indiana Jones and the Castle of Wolfenstein
Lord Razer chapter 17 . 1/2
well shit, that would explain how is dad is still alive.
Anime Borat chapter 15 . 10/20/2019
How could I have missed this? Damn lapses!
I like your concept of the power armor you used, really ties in with the SS's obsession to recognized as heirs to the historical Teutonic (even as they suppressed the then-still-active organization in their rise to power).
Anime Borat chapter 17 . 10/20/2019
Your latest two chapters are a tour-de-force! I must say that you impressed me with your twist and turns. The twist in the end is both unexpected and hard-hitting.

BJ's Nazi-killing isn't without its ramifications once again; I didn't expect one of the troopers to be Frau Engel's son. Seems Nazis cared for neither books nor students. No surprise given their brutality and ruthlessness.

I like the nods to classic Indy getting an upgrade, especially with the electro-whip. Also, have you watched Dune (1984)? Because that trick of slow penetration was demonstrated in it. And damn are those robots nasty!

And the Germans actually have their own phonetic alphabet, just as their opponents. The modern NATO phonetic alphabet featuring Alpha, Charlie, and Bravo wouldn't have existed by then.
Anime Borat chapter 14 . 10/16/2019
Finally managed to review this story. You did a great job as always and now Indy's got a new robo-hand.

The last line was a good way to end this chapter. It would probably provoke strong emotions in BJ, given his own crappy hell of a childhood, even if he knew that he knew nothing of and knew that Jones's dad is nothing like him.

I'd like to question the Wehrmacht's strength that you presented, but then this is Wolfenstein, with its embracing everything huge in scale from corridors to numbers. I assume some of that strength included the Ubersoldaten unless noted otherwise. He does have a point as he is likely privy to a lot of military information of the Reich in his yours of living dangerously undercover.

I really like how you included the God-key and linked it with Castle Wolfenstein. I'm eager to know what you have in store.
Lord Razer chapter 14 . 10/14/2019
so papa jones is still alive here huh? thats quite a twist.

Indiana being negative of their situation is grim but understandable given the hell of living as a fake nazi. As seeing them rule the world and people being happy about it would put a damper in wanting to do anything about. good thing Blazko is there to help him remember the good fight.
OMAC001 chapter 13 . 7/25/2019
Love this story! Hope the next update comes soon!
Lord Razer chapter 5 . 7/11/2019
and now we got another player on the board with son with revenge. Whats intriguing is that its an American who became a nazi so this might add some interesting dynamics later on. guess William keeps on making enemies with each death he makes.
Lord Razer chapter 4 . 7/11/2019
this was a good combat chapter showing William as a soldier using the environment and the enemy movements to his advantage to be able to take them down. I also liked how the commander seems to be competent in bringing his own personal shield generator, so it seems he will be quite the player in this story.

Also, dead dad and crying little girl. Yeah thats not going to be well with how it shows that while their nazis, they do have families and such. than again nazis.
Lord Razer chapter 3 . 7/11/2019
Seems William discovered the museum and already is disgusted with it. Its all brainwashing propaganda in destroying everything good in the world.
Lord Razer chapter 2 . 7/11/2019
this chapter was both depressing and terrifying in how history is remade and mocked by the nazis. Its even more horrible for Indiana Jones as he has to repeat this shit 24/7 and its killing him on the inside as history has been rewritten and that these children will grow to become brainwashed soldiers for the reich.

good job on showing the little details that make the nazis cruel and terrifying in how they rewrite history to fit their narratives.
Lord Razer chapter 1 . 7/11/2019
very nice, starting with some good world building of a sub section order that wanted to use the ancient tools for war and conquering...guess history has ways in which things repeat dont they?

also seems Deathshead left his mark on William in how he haunts his nightmares. good stuff here.
Anime Borat chapter 13 . 6/3/2019
I like how you started this fic with the famous John Wayne arrested for "terrorism" and his subsequent trial and execution. That certainly sounds like what the Duke will do in an occupied America timeline.
They don't give breaks to disabled, do they? Nazis created an atmosphere that stigmatizes disability, even when one deserves respect for having earned it in combat. Kinda ironic, seeing how their Ubersoldaten program could have meant spin-off research into bionics and prosthetics.
So what does General Vogel have in store for Heinrich? Can't wait, as I can't wait for Indy and his new friends from the resistance. Keep up the good work.
Anime Borat chapter 12 . 4/6/2019
We've been bingeing on and off on Marvel Cinematic Universe movies recently at my place so I can picture the violence in my mind's eye, with Wolfenstein R-ratedness, of course.
The cable swing made me think of Indy being in his element, resourcefulness and swinging from place to place, usually with his trademark whip.
Of deat God, he lost his hand!? I hope Roth can get him a nice prosthetic. This raises the hype a fair bit.
Anime Borat chapter 11 . 1/21/2019
Damn they meet! That was awesome!
So they've turned the Middle East into a ghetto? I don't know what level of sadism it is but Nazis really like bitter irony. But what's doubly ironic was that Nazis are getting Muslim backlash for their policies of squeezing the Jews into their lands, probably thinking that they'll be grateful for the diversion. Not.
Anime Borat chapter 9 . 10/29/2018
Chilling torture method and an even more chilling speech right there. I won't be surprised if the method was based on real ones.

Ah, the ending's painful and made worse that he almost made it.
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