awesome!

"Why Part 2" is great - thanks!

wishing so much that there is more, would love to find out how it now goes between Bella and Edward and what the outcome for everyone is in the long run

will there be continuation of this one shot?

please do a part 3 soon

please do a part 3

I loved this, especially getting to read it from Jasper POV. Hoping if you do a PT3 you have Bella paired with someone else, I just can't see Edward changing enough to be a good mate for her, he's to stuck in his ways and in my opinion not willing to change. Anyways another awesome story

Damn, go Jasper. I always thought he was the strongest too and that all the Cullen's just walked all over him. Awesome job.

Great take on this. So many great points. Edward. I love when Jasper put him in his place. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us.

good one.

top read. loved it. thanx.

Thanks for sharing another terrific installment of your vision. Could it possibly develop into an Alistair/Isabella pairing? You've already got a great Garrett story going and it appears that Jasper and Alice are truly mated. So ... I just cannot fathom Edward capable of changing his attitudes and personality enough to be a future mate for Isabella. But I'm quite biased. :) Then again, I'm not sure whether you have thought to develop this story much further since you call it "woulda, shoulda, coulda". Best wishes.

Bella was amazing and strong. Love how she stood up for Jasper and made the rest of them see what Jasper has done for them all these years. I glad that Jasper put his foot down to the family and Alice. Thanks for sharing your story.

Interesting plot. Love it.

Yay for Jasper!

Now, all he needs to do is get rid of Alice.

That would have sure changed things at school, eh? Edward's in trouble.