Reviews for Naruto and The Sanguine Nightmare |
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Reedz22 chapter 8 . 4/25 awwwwww it was going good so far |
Soul Reaper chapter 5 . 12/12/2018 Great story keep the chapters coming and the part with Tora in chapter 5 was hilarious. |
my 2 guys chapter 7 . 11/27/2018 that was good keep the chapters coming |
Mr guest chapter 2 . 11/19/2018 It's called Rasengan. ra-sen-gan. Please do your research when using words specifically from Naruto. |
biginferno chapter 7 . 11/17/2018 great chapter if you are still considering suggestions for the harem I hope you consider Samui,Yugito,Tayuya,Ino and Temari |
Kuman chapter 6 . 6/18/2018 Still many spelling mistakes. You need an editor or to revise your chapters before you post them. Looking forward to how you handle the exams. Also please do not write Naruto POV again. In fact I highly advise you not to write pov at all. It's better to stick to third person and avoid writing sentences like 'I looked at the girl and smiled it ruins the flow and sound awkward. |
Kuman chapter 5 . 6/18/2018 A good take on the wave mission. Several spelling mistakes that are definatley a product of auto correct like NATO instead of gato, Baku instead of Baku and so on |
LordofTerror chapter 2 . 6/13/2018 wtf is the reseingan? did you mean rasengan? |
omegaderose chapter 2 . 4/6/2018 RASENGAN NOT RESEINAGN LEARN THE NAME |
HPfan7-8 chapter 4 . 3/17/2018 I hope you give naruto a different element besides wind since it is played out and nobody uses it besides the rasenshuriken. |
thor94 chapter 2 . 3/17/2018 so naruto graduated, but you should tell how naruto learnt the rasengan. No way arashi can know it, excepted if his real identity is minato namikaze. |
thor94 chapter 1 . 3/17/2018 how arashi could teach naruto shadow clones? it is supposed a forbidden justu FROM KONOHA, shinobi from other villages shouldn't know how to perform it. |
Scarease chapter 2 . 3/14/2018 So far you have several problems that noticed .One Uzimaki scrolls Like Blood sealed ,Two most extreme prized so for protected ,Most Uzimaki Clan Seals and jitsu Lost inside Uzimaki Vault that no one has been able to get into .Three Shadow Clone jitsu is Konoha kenjitsu so how did Arashi Dorago Know it ?He only way would be if Revered engineered it ,Learned it form Missing Ninja or Konoha Ninja. Two Waterfall Minor Village quit weak them knowing the see them not really let Tailed Beast host outside village much only for missions and to chounin exams that about it . Akashi Probably has not met other Tailed Beast Hosts considers most villages keep them hidden ,out of sight ,protected form interact especial with Foreign Ninja . Third Only Kakashi ,Jiriaya and final Naruto father knows Ressingan .So how does Naruto know with out any training method to learn it or instruction form one four people Dorago is Foreign Ninja so Do not see Konoha Give them S to A rank Jitsu such as the Shadow Clone and Ressingan Heavily Guard their Jitsu .Also Let one few Bloodlines out of village also do see them doing often consider small Minor village . I could see let Fu into Konoha if found out about Akatsuki so . |
Scarease chapter 1 . 3/14/2018 Sounds like He From Clans of Night Parade Clans .Clans inspired many legend of monster such as Sirens ,Merfolk ,Were ,Shapeshifter ,Tengu ,Ogres ,Wraiths ,Vampires and such .This Alliance was broken many clans hunted down or settled down .Members included the Yuki ,Kaguya ,and many others .Arashi Dorago Could be Last Survive Member of Vampire Clan .Not true vampire but bloodline Vampire treats and bloodline abilities .I Have Blood Vampire clans girl with Split personality disorder .If interest hear about them let now i will type them up. |
adislt chapter 1 . 3/13/2018 there's only one thing that bugging me and that's how he able to learn rasengan? it's yondaime signature jutsu despite of how simple it's look, the process is really complicated, and I think it's really unbelievable that other village nibja have the scroll or info about said jutsu, the possibility of library in konoha also really low, kakashi despite of able tp do it, always preferred use chidori |