Loving this story so far. Absolutely brilliant!
Hope you have a happy Halloween!

Hey I hope you’ll continue, this has been one of my favorite hermione x OC stories, if that’s how it will continue, besides Vergil Leonidas’s, I really enjoy this one, keep it up!

hey man do continue this story

Jim Pickens is our lord and savior

I just read through all of it, and it's one of my favorite fanfics I've ever read. Hopefully you'll continue!

I have really enjoyed this fanfiction. One of the best I've read in a while. P.S. While I was saddened by the absence I hope all is well in your life and I really hope you continue!

Can’t have a fanfiction without having some moderately depressing and edgy oc that is haunted by nightmares literally all the time telling him how trashy and disappointing he is.

You are aware the the riddle family wasn’t like Voldemort. Having the whatever tongue that lets you speak to snakes doesn’t really mean anything as well, it just means he’s a descendant of slytherian but that isn’t necessarily a bad thing.

The belief that orphan children are sobbing for their parents at night is unrealistic. I mean sure if they were let’s say 5-8 in the beginning sure but that’s the age we’re a child is most mailable and open to change. If other orphans are crying for their mothers when they were orphaned as a baby though they can’t cry out for people they’ve never known.

The story would have been better for me if Theo was more independent and not this Naruto-like friendship beats everything BS! Couldn't you have the golden trio be what they are, the golden TRIO? I've had too much of Hermione to last me many lifetimes and so this is where I stop reading. Good luck

The story would have been better for me if Theo was more independent and not this Naruto-like friendship beats everything BS! Couldn't you have the golden trio be what they are, the golden TRIO? I've had too much of Hermione to last me many lifetimes and so this is where I stop reading. Good luck

gonna be honest at the beginning Theodore is a little pathetic bitch

Just finished reading this after finding it a week ago, and I just wanna tell you how much I love this story. So many fics with an OC are huge red flags, but Theo is not only the best OC character I've seen in a fic, but a character who I wish was in the book's themselves. He doesn't steal away from other characters and actively makes the story better, especially Chamber of Secrets and the current bits of Goblet of Fire. but all of them are improved in my opinion. Also just wanted to say that your writing is excellent, both in terms of moving the plot as well as gramatically. I like to picture the scenes playing out in my head, and bad grammar immediately takes me out of that, so I'm extremely grateful for the great grammar and sentence structure that you have. Your chapters are so engrossing and I end up breezing thorough most of them in a nice, uninterrupted flow. To parrot some other comments, I agree that you've done the romance extremely well here. Many stories rush it and it can feel like it came out of nowhere, but you really let it build, and those small moments over the last couple of books were super cute. Theo and Hermione's relationship feels so natural, and I'm super happy they finally got together. Sorry if this came off as overly wordy, but I just really wanted to gush. This story is easily one of my favorite updating stories, and I can't wait for the next update.

Please update this amazing story soon. We need more Theo .

It’ll be interesting to see whether or not Theodore’s name gets pulled out of the goblet. Either way, I’m looking forward to the next chapter.