More pls

I only take a four minute shower if my mom's making cookies (: :)

MAKE: Percy Jackson x 17/18 years old Estelle Blofis (is the daughter of Paul Blofis and Sally Jackson and the younger half-sister of Percy Jackson)
Percy Jackson x BENTHESIKYME (GODDESS OF THE WAVES, daughter of Poseidon and Amphitrite)
Percy Jackson x Pallas (daughter of Triton)
Percy Jackson x TRITEIA (FRESH WATER NYMPH, daughter of the sea god Triton)
Percy Jackson x CYMOPOLEIA (GODDESS OF THE VIOLENT SEA CURRENTS AND WAVES DURING STORMS, daughter of the god Poseidon)
Percy x DESPOINA (GODDESS OF MYSTERIES IN ARCADIA, daughter of Demeter and Poseidon)
Percy x Caribdis (Charybdis,daughter of Poseidon and Gaia), Percy eliminates the curse of zeus to his sister...

I get you are trying to make Percy honorable. But you over did it. You also made him inconsistent as hell. One minute he is suave and confident. Then he's scared and basically indecisive and wimpy. Not because of some natural, organic events. But simply because you want the women to be better than Percy. You want the women to have the dominant roles in this.

Love the story! Much better than the original! Is it on hiatus?
I'd love to see Reyna next!

It's been almost a year since you last updated... are you still planning on continuing this? I really want to see it go on...

Are you going to finish this? I'm intrigued!

noice.

Good lemon

Man I wish you added Pheobe and Thalia into the harem.

Yo, this is awesome. I appreciate the fact that this isn’t just a smut story but also has decent plot. Keep it up!

This story is phenomenal,and I hope you update soon. Criticism can be a harsh mistress, but I assure you, this work stands strong regardless. There are countless tales of Percy screwing everything in sight, but I’ve never read anything quite like this.

That’s not to say that all my feedback is positive, however. While it’s passed the point of remedying, I’d be remiss not to call attention to the faux pas of character assassinating several prominent characters in a story whose hook is that it’s trying to take a believable route to reach the harem end. Having Jason, Leo, and Frank all turn out to be Fairweather friends just to free up their girlfriends to join Percy’s harem took me out of the story pretty quick, even if I ultimately got back in by the end.

Lastly— and this is totally a personal thing— Percy brings on Drew before Thalia? Like, if he wanted to honor the Hunt and it’s code, I guess that makes sense. But if his motive when picking lovers is “People I won’t hate being around for the long haul”, Thalia seems about as much of a no brainer as Rachel or Reyna, but could also add a new level of confrontation as things between Percy and Thalia tend to do. Then again, I’m an unapologetic Perlia fan, so take all this with a grain of salt.

TLDR: This Story is different in a really good way, and I hope it gets the conclusion it deserves one day.

Quite frankly, I think characterization is the most vital part of this work. Excellent job, but might I recommend a subplot? Having something besides romance and sex would make an excellent contrast, and would make those moments all the more enjoyable.
Also, PLEASE do not make any of the girls attracted to each other. That kind of ruins the point of a harem. A threesome would be fine, but take it easy on the girls interacting. Maybe more of a do two at once kind of thing.
Keep up the story, and do not forget characterization!

please continue

The plot of this story is really good, and the sex does not seem generic af, keep up the great work!