An excellent story with a very heartfelt protagonist. The way the want for the beauty of mortal life is captured in a splendid mannner. The themes using the battle spells from mobile legends were perfect and well intergrated into the story

Best ml story everrrr

beautiful. i ship argus and rafa so much that the betrayal made me sad. alice felt more humane here than in any other fics and i love how you give justice to her excited for kagura's.

Dude... THIS. WAS. AMAZING.

I was reluctant to read because I'm not that interested in Alice, but the way you wrote this chapter... Man, it made me read the whole thing. I feel so sorry for Alice because all she wanted was freedom, but ended up losing her wings and the power to control her own body. It's also sad that Rafaela ends up killing her too.

Argus... I've never read his backstory before in the game, so now I'm curious to know his backstory. I'm not sure whether his evil personality in here is related to his backstory, but I would like to find out.

Can't wait to see the next chapter. I'm excited to see what you're planning to do with "Retribution" and Kagura. Keep up the good work!

Ahhh so here you are! I was wondering what happened to "My Queen"! Interesting idea to have stories named after battle spells. But why is this M-rated?

omgggg Alice’s transformation was scary ! so dark tho. anyways beaut writing and hope you update. pls write more rafaela she’s my fav ! thanks

who else cried when alice lost her wings ? :,)

Aaaah this kind of fic is so refreshing!:D hope you update soon:))