Loved this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Read this from a recommendation from Temporal Knight’s fic Mutant Deviations. Excellent story, tightly written and the ending gave literal shivers. Congratulations on a new viewpoint on Sophia Hess and why she isn’t fit to live.

Coldly possible and very enjoyable to read

I have been enjoying all your stories, but this one really had an emotional impact. In a good way. This Taylor seems to have the same pragmatism as Canon, but is going about it in a more efficient way. May seem to be a small difference, but I could see the changes growing larger quickly if this one continued.

Thank you for an enjoyable and thoughtful read.

Nazi's - Nazis

bearing its throat - baring its throat

piece of mind - peace of mind

Poor Sophia.

Nice

Wow this is really AU with some things, purely on the ABB stuff which is nothing but Fandom but still over all a good one shot.

Sure Taylor lied when she didn't have to which proves she still isn't a wolf despite any posturing, a wolf doesn't have to lie like that in such a situation where you truly own all.

Still a good story, but I would like to see the ABB at times actually shown to be as they are in canon and Wildbow's comments, not just rampant fandom.

Wonderful

"Those who live by the iron, by the iron die."
This is a Mexican proverb which can either refer to "live cheaply and die cheaply", such as my father, who was a horrible boss and found his "death by natural causes" on the fists of his own employees; or "live violently and die violently", such as so many people who seek the drug cartels for easy money, but then their lives have the worth of pawns and can only grow by being both lucky and always more and more ruthless.

This is absolutely brilliant. Very fitting. I love it.

Really well done, thank you.

Love the story. I reread the law of the jungle pome, and realized just how much the unwritten rules related to it.