Reviews for Shock
Umimop chapter 12 . 7/13
I love your fic so much! Your realistic approach is really good to see for a change! And you actually let Fred shine! I extremely grateful for that. He's my favourite.
Though, personally I disagree with some messages in your author notes. While yes, a lot of Alive!Tadashi fics are more on simple and sweet emotional side, it's not something bad. (And I'm not telling you should love them, because I get why you don't. It's just sounded a bit... Too harsh if I may.) Several reasons unrealistic approach exists: 1) Not all people are able or simply want to describe or read datailed stuff about mental health issues, because it may trigger their own ones. 2) There are no universality when it comes to mental health. My own reaction to traumatizing events is just that — trying to act as if nothing happened and I can have a fresh start from that, as soon as possible, focusing on positive outcome only. "You should panic!" is the most common complain, that I hear during really hard times. Always ready for a miracle, so. Yes, such dorks exist too))) 3) self indulgence is a valid thing, as an author you know that. 4)Most of such fics are either written by novice authors or have a different premise, where Hiro gets hints or warnings it may happen, so he is not as unprepared. So if there are some hard feelings about fandom because of that, just let it go. You executed the idea in really great way. Anyway, I hope, my comment wasn't inappropriate, and if it was, I sincerely apologize for that. Thanks for amazing fic!
freshcreationgarden chapter 13 . 11/25/2018
This is really good and quite refreshing to read among the bh6 fics. Cant wait for the sequel. Great job.
All Things Animated chapter 13 . 11/10/2018
There are a couple of grammatical mistakes. Other than that, good job.
Guest chapter 13 . 11/9/2018
SHAKESPEARE! Yay! Thank you!
jettmanas chapter 13 . 11/9/2018
Thanks for the mention in the A/N!
typos: feeling (crushed) like
tea?" (s)he asked.

Enjoyed the start, w/practical info on them getting back, then Wasabi, Go Go, and the others voicing how they too were hurt by Tadashi. Interesting detail on his powers. Solid humor w/Fred, including his mom's reaction to him at the scene's end.

Good writing of the therapy (also Cass w/the cat pictures), and a clever transition into the actual apology. I liked Karmi's response, and the dialogue for both. Great job w/the prison visit, including that research on the number of years for Robert. Nice emotion from them both, and the harsh end to that talk.

What a scene at the cafe- who'd of thought HL would go that far to protect their identities from Cass. Interesting- Globby & Obake- guess it takes place when they were around & up to their antics. And the details on Tadashi going back to college, being declared alive, and where he chose to live- well done w/this story. Glad you wrote, and completed it!
x-ephmrl-x chapter 12 . 10/25/2018
So basically, I was looking for a Tadashi/GoGo fanfiction and found this instead and I'm so glad I clicked on it. I've been reading it all day and I can't believe it's almost over holy crap. Hopefully you do make a sequel, that'd be awesome. I love the way you write. This had me in my feelings.
x-ephmrl-x chapter 11 . 10/25/2018
Firstly: I freaking love this story so, so much. It's very well written and I just love it period.

For the characters' real names, all I know is that GoGo's name in the comics is Leiko Tanaka and Jaime said her name is Ethel in the movie I believe? Honey Lemon's real name in the comics is Aiko Miyazaki, but she's Hispanic in the movie so it wouldn't really work unless she was half Japanese?
jettmanas chapter 12 . 10/18/2018
Thanks for the AN mention. Glad you're story's doing well. After watching the fantastic season finale last weekend, and a Season 2 on the way, I think it's a great time for BH6.

fixes:
He started (walking) when he felt
Go Go ducked (as) a gooey
flew back at her, (and) heard

I liked your explanation of where the brothers talked and why (Cass might hear BH6 details at home). Clearing up the past, including why Hiro took on his role and a team, and why he continued (leading into Baymax Returns) was done well. Nice job w/Hiro's mention of how much it hurt him that Tadashi went into that building. And explanation of why people shouldn't do that in general. Solid dialogue on the counseling, and a good question on how Tadashi was doing.

Surprising action scene in this, well-described. The mix of danger and comedy was spot-on (including Human Backpack). Great reaction to Hiro and Tadashi showing up. And especially to Globby setting him on fire. Very bad taste on Globby's part, but he had no idea (I hope). I have to wonder what kind reviving HL used on Wasabi. :)

And quite the mystery on what Tadashi's relation to fire is and how he survived- back then. Fantastic chapter.
lexrilfrostvale chapter 11 . 10/17/2018
I don't mean to offend you or trash on your work but, I think you set hiro's victim card too high... In a logical and emotional manne,r tadashi is actually the one on hurt here, y'know...experiencing their parents death, had no apparent childhood due to responsibilities, had to put his self aside for the benefit of others, betrayed by his prof, everyone else shouting at him..etc..
Your work is still one of the best I've read in years in the bh6 fandom.
Its not bad that you made it this way, its just I've noticed this on most fics that they overly victimize hiro, its just my opinion.
(Your work is still good tho, really I mean it).
jettmanas chapter 11 . 10/9/2018
No problem on mentioning Tadashi in the episode. I should check out Tumblr. But yes, I do watch every episode the day (or day after) it airs.

Nice job w/writing Hiro's internal conflict, then thoughts on things such as why Baymax didn't tell him about the chip hidden in his rocketed fist.

fixes:
(")With Tadashi. I mean,

Great job w/Hiro explaining what he felt the day of the Expo. Solid writing of Hiro's emotions spilling out when he got to the part of Tadashi running into the fire. I liked Rogers posing questions to Hiro to understand. Good point on Tadashi being reckless, being a hypocrite to Hiro in that way, not apologizing, and how this affects all the mourning for him.

Quite a story of Rogers and his father. Also the mention of Hiro having an amazing opportunity and to not ignore Tadashi. Good scene after in the lab.

Thanks for the info on how much is left in the story and how you wanted some other fics are, and you wanting to do differently. Looking forward to the rest.
RandomNerd3 chapter 11 . 10/8/2018
Praise! So glad u updated, cant wait to see what you have in store for the last few chapters.
purple devil 87 chapter 10 . 10/4/2018
omg! o to the m to the g i love it so suspensefull
AngetianPrincess18 chapter 10 . 10/4/2018
Karmi deserved that, she's a huge jerk
jettmanas chapter 10 . 10/4/2018
Welcome back. I enjoyed the references to some episodes since your last update. A few fixes:

chair (scraping)
(courier) job

Nice tease of almost getting Wasabi's name. (I hope the series will tell- someday) Also, Go Go's talk w/Cass. I like that she's piecing clues together. I'm surprised she still doesn't know, but I'm guessing she will eventually in the show.

Solid dialogue for the therapy. And interesting scene w/Tadashi wondering when Hiro will talk to him. Wow, didn't know about Tadashi in the upcoming episode on 10/6; that will be something. Shocking scene at the end; too bad Fred didn't get her or Hiro out of there sooner. Seems therapy isn't enough. Looking forward to the next part. Well done.
VADIM GOEKE chapter 10 . 10/4/2018
no offense but is rogers gay?

if so then i have NO choice in reading your story anymore
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