Oh my cheese, just leave a sweet cliffie right here! You stuck? Need plot bunnies? I have a few I could send your way if you want.

Pobre Randy.
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Poor Randy.

Great Story and Honestly
I like reading Slade's lines using a Ron Perlman voice

SO exciting! Can't wait for the next chapter. Will Theresa find out the Ninja's identity and will she be able to save him? Is McFist dead or merely injured. Who is Slade's employer (if we can learn that?) And, most importantly, how will Randy beat the greatest killer in the world?

PLEASE have the next chapter out soon! :-)

Awesome story I can't wait to see where this story goes.

Well, this is an exciting beginning! Guessing Theresa will learn Randy's secret?

This cool story and intest too

Holy bajesus! This is an awesome start to the story, reminds me a lot like Daredevil and Spider man mixed together. I'm eager to see more develop.