| Reviews for While the Gods Sleep |
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   Firestorm337 chapter 9 . 7/17/2018 cool |
| The Animaniac Dude chapter 7 . 7/3/2018 I wonder how upset Other Hancock was when she realized that she had fallen in love with a gay man. She probably threw herself off a building or something, which... is actually pretty sad now that I think about it. You should address that, even as a joke. it'd be funny. |
| The Fall of Spring chapter 6 . 6/20/2018 _ I lost track, kudos to you though |
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/30/2018 You really are a great writer! There was a huge potential for confusion due to the other versions of the strawhats, yet you managed to keep them rather clear through your awesome use of formatting and consistent use of naming! I'm really really excited to see where this leads and how you plan to progress more! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/30/2018 OMG. I NEED TO PAUSE AT THIS JUNCTURE OF CHAPTER 3 TO ASK, IS KUINA ALIVE FOR OTHER ZORO? THE ITALICISED ONE? IS THAT WHY HE ONLY HAS TWO SWORDS AND EMOTIONS-WISE SEEMS MORE OPEN AND OKAY WITH SHOWING AFFECTION AND CLOSENESS WITH THE OTHER STRAWHATS? THE TRAUMA OF KUINA'S DEATH ISN'T THERE? I might be jumping ahead of myself but WOW are you a great writer 3 chapters in and I am completely HOOKED and excited to read more, you've got an awesome plot and writing style going on here! |
| blueh chapter 5 . 4/22/2018 YO THIS IS GOOD! god now I need to know what happens next man |
| sdkop21 chapter 5 . 4/17/2018 OMG! This has so much potential! Can't wait to read more! Keep at it! |
| 333 chapter 5 . 4/12/2018 That CLIFFHANGER! I loved this chapter, keep up the updates because I'm going insane right now wondering what happens next! |
| Wordlet chapter 5 . 4/12/2018 Ohhhhhhh, so the dark blur is Luffy - but who are they, i wonder!? I'll definitely be staying tuned to find out! Thanks for posting! |
| FairyAlchemist400 chapter 5 . 4/12/2018 It really sounds like something's about to go down, but nah it's just the crew being assaulted by a high speed Luffy lol |
| I-Kan-Spel chapter 5 . 4/12/2018 Amazing! I'm loving it so far |
| Wordlet chapter 4 . 4/10/2018 The more you hint at the other reality the more intriguing it becomes! What persostent enemies has alter-luffy got? Who else might be alive? What other sorts of abilitues might the straw hats have? It's fascinstong, isn't it? To think that one crew might outwardly say zoro is the first mate- because he is here too just in an unspoken way. Zoro put it right, he's whatever Luffy needs him to be. There's nothing wrong with that! |
| Nonyaarb chapter 4 . 4/9/2018 I wanna see how this works out. Interesting story |
| The Sleeping Zombie chapter 1 . 4/8/2018 Just found this fic and I must.. It Is Fantastic! |
| I-Kan-Spel chapter 4 . 4/7/2018 Gahhh. I know I shouldn't be demanding updates, but to just have a cliff hanger like that. In 4 chapters, you lured me in, kicked me in the nuts with your ingenuity, and slapped me in the face with a cliff hanger. Plox... update soon :) Great stuff! |
