| Reviews for This Won't End Well (30k Isekai) |
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  lukas chapter 75 . 6/4 Thank you for this excellent story.I really enjoyed it. |
 liamrodhudson331 chapter 34 . 4/4 I hope we get to see more psychic powers... |
| JimmyHall24 chapter 41 . 2/17 Hmmm.. |
| JimmyHall24 chapter 36 . 2/17 Wew |
| JimmyHall24 chapter 33 . 2/17 They tried to kill ya and your family hoss. And ya feel bad for protecting yourself? |
| JimmyHall24 chapter 27 . 2/17 I know it’s a few chapters after the fact but Dawn Knights is a nice name |
| Ewueil chapter 85 . 2/8 Hi, thanks for the story! I really like the premise and feel that this could be great. There are some things that don’t make sense to me, mainly that there are references to parts of the story that are not written like the nephew that suddenly pops up and people on the main planet that should have been introduced but now come from nowhere, are there chapters that are written somewhere but not published? You could also do with a beta reader as you use a fair few words that are technically written correct (spell check wise) but don’t mean anything in relation to the story. Anyway, keep up the good work as it really has potential! |
| Phantomdancer15 chapter 84 . 2/2 Found it on threads/this-wont-end-well-30k-isekai.587209/ |
| Phantomdancer15 chapter 85 . 2/2 Great story but worried it’s dead when is new chapter |
| 1Korwin1 chapter 85 . 1/31 will you place your SB chapters here or you decided to leave this site? |
| Whitefury28 chapter 85 . 1/23 I loved this story, I'm really looking forward to more of it. You have a gift with writing. |
| Guest chapter 85 . 12/16/2019 Need a link for the continued story |
| Guest chapter 85 . 11/22/2019 PSA: The hasn't abanded this story, just been posting updates on the forum thread for this story on . As of writing, the story is on chapter 130. |
| Guest chapter 85 . 10/11/2019 I hate unfinished stories, they take up space and lead you on |
| Guest chapter 26 . 9/26/2019 Chapter 26 and still in prologue |
