Very nicely written! Enjoyed the introspection :)

To be honest, I’d not considered him having to get back to the dance afterwards. Nice movie scene-filler. Hurts my heart, though, which means you wrote it well. Thanks for sharing!

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Well done

Yeah, Toomes was someone who broke out of the two dimensional mold of a criminal. Still greedy however as he was unsatisfied with the immense wealth he already had

Nice work developing further why Peter did not want to become an Avenger yet

Oh this one's good! Is it only one shot?

very nice development, strong characterization
~Aslan's Daughter

Wow this was good! Loved it!

loved it!