Nice ending my dude.
im looking forward for the third installment.

It keeps getting better.
Great job my dude.

- Side: Good

Uh oh that aint good.
Alex you better watch your back man.
keep it up my dude.
Here is an OC for yaName: Lukhas
- Age: 18
- Species: Spix Macaw
- Gender: Male
- Appearance: Emerald green eyes, Dark blue feathers and has a cyan birthmark on his shoulder, There are three head feather pointing down from the back of his head.
- Personality: A little bit arrogant, sarcastic sometimes, happy and loved to help.
- Powers: Exalted Blade
Description: A sword that is made out of pure blue energy, It could blind enemies with a radius of a couple meters. Using this power for too long could potentially kill its user.

Epic first chapter my dude.
Loved it.
Keep it up.

Uh oh, not good :(

This is a good start keep it up :)