Reviews for Distrusted
SailorCC chapter 13 . 3/29
Man its been a year and its my second time reading this, I’m dying to know what she’ll say next!
Bewinha chapter 13 . 1/26
I hope at some point you'll continue this. It's one of my favorite helsa fics.
ThawMyFrozenHeart chapter 13 . 3/30/2019
We are so glad you're back! I'm so sorry you went through all these struggles but you're definitely not alone. Put yourself first always and we will support you!
bp chapter 13 . 3/28/2019
I read chapter 1-13 in one go. Couldn't stop, I just had to see what happens next. Yes, imo, a great read!
You broke my heart with that Hans-centric chapter, well executed! Brava!
Looking forward to the next chapter.

All the best, bp~.
Guest chapter 13 . 3/3/2019
Welcome back! Elsa has two very difficult decisions to make. the first how to tell Anna about her weird relationship with Hans and the second if she will renew said relationship after his new message, since she had decided not to seek him again. The Anna thing is more serious and she can't keep it secret forever.
henrytudor1701 chapter 12 . 3/1/2019
Not another one of those "Hi, my name is Hans and even though I'm a dirtbag I'm going to fuck Elsa." fanfics.
henrytudor1701 chapter 13 . 3/1/2019
Not another one of those "Hi, my name is Elsa and I love falling for dirtbags and miscreants." fanfics.
Guest chapter 12 . 8/19/2018
please update
Guest chapter 12 . 7/28/2018
please update this story and remember me
Mishi Nagano chapter 3 . 6/23/2018
as a woman who is 7 months pregnant, pregnancy brain is a big issue. also, baby showers are usually planned by someone else, not by the mother to be. just saying.
loving the story so far
Guest chapter 12 . 5/8/2018
Sitron's talk (by the way I like you had him in this) to Hans about the worth of himself, did good to him and made the right decision, drunk or not. The little background info about his family was interesting. He delivered the letters to Elsa, without expecting anything and spoke the truth. But as it was expected Elsa couldn't resist the attraction and it has led to a new round of their activities!
Guest chapter 11 . 5/7/2018
Yooo you have some talent for this storytelling ish
Guest chapter 10 . 4/27/2018
It is good the baby shower went well and didn't add extra stress to Elsa. He sent her sms asking if she is ok?! Wow! Elsa wanted to forget about him but fate had other plans. What were the odds to have a dinner meeting where he works! I like their little talk. Surely this is not the end, as Elsa thinks. Keep up the great work!
Lady Flurryous chapter 8 . 4/28/2018
Ok, so 2 chapters in a day and later on another update, I haven't been able to keep up with it! Thank you for your dedication to this story!
What a mess of a first time for Elsa ... and another thing that you got perfectly: Elsa's behavior of putting the blame for everything on others, not recognizing her share of the responsability for the situation they end up in. Seriously, it started so well, with so much promise of truly releasing hr sexual frustration, her need for human contact and it all went downwards. Sure, Hans was impatient, which was true to his character, which is sad, because I'm a sucker for dirty Helsa fics with lots of steaming moments and it seems quite hard to picture more of these interactions knowing what comes in the following chapters.
Though, at the same time, this conclusion to their escapades is also something quite plausible to actually happen in RL, and I have faith that your decision to put the story in this direction will lead to a interesting story, exploiting more the humane side of these characters, their flaws, their vulnerabilities and their ability to learn something from all these events.
Great chapter, :)
Guest chapter 8 . 4/26/2018
It started extremely well but it ended so badly. The pain triggered her guilt and I am surprised Hans said to forget the deal. Does he really mean it? I am curious to see how they will resume(?) their weird dealing. Her thoughts that his jacket is contaminating germs in her floor and his kisses are leaving bacteria on her skin were funny.
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