Oh please update soon. There is so much I want to read about what comes next. The reactions of both the Stark and Royal families. There is so much that could happen, I would love to read it! :) :) :)

Ok, I'm in, Iwant to discover more.
Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Oh wow I forgot all about this story. It was definitely one of my favorites and I love the latest update

Great story! But please do look for a beta reader because you have a few problems with grammar and tenses which makes reading this otherwise well written story a bit hard.

Why Joffrey is with Royal party, he should be in Storm's end learning how to rule instead of staying with Cersei, even Tywin never allow that.

Oh lord.
Keep up the good work.

Interesting story. Saw you take time between updates. Have followed the story.

Awn... I was hoping that Cersei was the queen beyond the wall... (̩̩́_̩̩̀).

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I am kidding XD

I think something went wrong in the posting?

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What kind of Code is this,this chapter is not readable

Gotta fix the font on the new chapter

Love the first two chapters but there's something wrong with the markup for the 3rd chapter.

this is a really good first two chapters can't wait to read more

I should have left this review ages ago so, first up, apologies for being so late. It's by no means a reflection on the quality of the chapter which is second to none. I thought you captured Aegon perfectly. A slightly prissy, spoiled prince experiencing the slender charms of the North for the first time. He's feels out of place and seems out of place. The culture shock is real and I like that.

Robb came across well, too. Loved the crypts in this story, the addition of the oil lighting system you put in. The dynamics between him and Aegon were good - tentative at first, but warming up slightly by the end. I'm really looking forward to Robb/Rhaenys interactions.

However, the final paragraph of this chapter was just awesome. I love how you co-opted a little bit of canon and twisted it to work for your own plot. We know who the wildling queen is, of course. And I love the added twist she sent Osha and co. to spy.

Incidentally, is Mance still there? He was one of the musicians playing in Winterfell and I totally forgot to ask you about that. Anyway, great work and I can't wait for the next chapter. Apologies again in being so remiss in leaving this review.