I love it T~T I’m so sad to see Minato go, especially, when all he wanted was peace. But alas, I’m happy with the story, its pacing and storytelling. Kudos to you, Author! 3

That last chapter made me both happy and sad. Happy at how you wrapped up everything and it had a good end but sad that the story has ended.
I’m definitely going to check out your other stories.

When Sasuke and Naruto just laid on the beach and Sasuke just said “Tell me about the ocean” my heart went all over the place. And the way the “lemons” for their situation and emotions feels natural. I read a lot of fanfictions where the lemon and the story feel very disconnected. But not here. Thank you so much for writing this amazing story. I’m kinda sad that there’s I l’y one chapter left

This chapter made me go through an array of emotions. I mean I knew they wouldn’t kill each other but I didn’t know what to expect. And you did a great job of keeping up the suspense before everything went sideways.

I just can’t put my phone down... like what’s gonna happen next?

Oh noooooooo mannn Im so sadddd I cant put my phone down

That moment between Sasuke and Naruto was so nice and I like the way Gaara and Naruto became friends. And the laughter filled with sorrow part made me tear up

Ahhh my heart broke at the end of the chapter. This story needs more reviews and needs to be read more. So many long fics end up being disappointing the more you reach the end and I really hope this won’t be like that because so far I CANT STOP READING I LOVE IT

I am loving this.. and the way you wrote it is just beautiful. I can’t wait to see what’s next

ahhh I just finished it so I doubt I'd read your update on ao3 a anytime soon, a story is nicer when it's fresh and new, but I'll book mark it can return later

either way I really liked this! so I'm excited to reread it in the future.

maybe edit the note in the first chapter to let future readers know it's being rewritten?

thanks for your writing!

I just finished reading your story and I loved every minute of it. I loved the way you brought all of their emotions to life! I cried at a lot of scenes and couldn't put my phone down. I just wanted to say, great work. I can't wait to read more of your work.

im speechless. i was bawlinb but now i am speechless. that was hands down the best muthafucking story ive ever read. you have blessed my eyes. i love you, author

lmao bro its 11pm and im bawling on my bed jesus CHRIST

I totally loved your story from the beginning to the end. It was such a beautiful journey to see them knew each, grew up with each other and even with all the struggles they had to face they still finally end together
Thank you for this story.

I must admit Author, this story was amazing. It reminded me of Romeo and Juliet, but less tragic. The way you wrote the story pulled at my heart strings and I loved every second of it.