| Reviews for Returning Races |
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   Eaglestorm27 chapter 11 . 11/26/2019 Interresting is that a new ennemy or a new ally i don't know . Hey i'm still wondering why the Earth fleet didn't have any escort class ship alongside a battleship class |
| chloe chapter 11 . 12/9/2018 Shame this story has been abandoned |
| chloe chapter 11 . 10/27/2018 Please carry on this story |
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/23/2018 Please update soon |
| chloe chapter 11 . 8/7/2018 Looking forward to the next chapter |
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/18/2018 please update soon |
| Oooookaaaaaayyyy chapter 11 . 7/8/2018 I have no idea how this will tie into the story. at the start i thought the author posted the wrong document. Maybe the destiny line? clarification would be gold |
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/8/2018 I’m very lost in this chapter. I hope it ties in somehow but for now I’m lost. |
| chloe chapter 11 . 7/8/2018 Not sure about the chapter, I assume that this will link with the rest of the story in a later chapter |
| oxyd2013 chapter 10 . 7/1/2018 Great general idea for a fic, I'm a fan. However I find your writing is sometimes a bit confusing with very long sentences and some repetitions or errors here and there. Some cut and paste trouble maybe? Anyway, concerning the stargate universe there is something that has always bothered me: the IOA! Why would world governments continue to choose to be represented by an organization that has gone rogue right from the start of it's existence? Among many other things: Encouraging mutinies, releasing replicators on a whole galaxy on purpose, incredibly adversarial attitudes, unchecked authority on everything and a track record of failures! They are caricatural mustache-twirling bad guys. Please, get rid of them just for the sake of credibility :-) |
| chloe chapter 10 . 6/30/2018 Great Chapter |
| chloe chapter 9 . 6/23/2018 Nice chapter |
| Major Simi chapter 9 . 6/23/2018 well nice chapter but a bit of a big time jump between chapter |
| Ironc chapter 8 . 6/21/2018 Einfach super Geniale Geschichte von dir. Sag bitte bescheid wenn du weiter schreibst, danke Danke für diese Geschichte! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/19/2018 Please update soon |
