Great story so far

It's back! Yay!

For some reason even though there was the words 'two people' I somehow thought it was a purple haired man with a sword.

would love to see where you go with this story

Hey, thanks for the chapter :)

This sounds like a really interesting concept. Sorry to hear you lost your USB. I hope motivation strikes again.

Hello are you alive can you post the chapter

Awww... the summary had me so excited too...

please update, it starts great

Okay, there are actually something really awkward in there, but Kudos for your good writing, I don't even know what make it awkward in the first place except something that you pointed out...
Anyway, what I am curious about now is would Violet meet Shiro? Satan?

THIS IS SO GOOD! PLEASE WRITE MORE!

*Ugly cries* I need this in my life so much, you don't was a well thought out piece, we don't often see stories with their mother and I enjoyed this so much. You can see that Rin & Yukio have her personality from how you've written her. She's fiery but with a kind heart. Their interactions were great to read and I just...damn. I loved it all. Thank you so much for this.

This was just such a good story, I hope there will be more.

This is a really interesting start to the story and I look forward to reading more of it!

oh my lord this is beautiful!

Actually so good though... I love the way you're writing this and this idea seems really cool. I can't wait for more!

Honestly, this the first time I have read a story like this. First you change the plot, then you integrate Harry Potter. I REALLY love the beginning of this story. Please continue on this road of creativity and inspiration. Also, just the thought of Rin and Yukio being raised to love each other even though in the manga/anime Yukio has quite the complicated feelings for his OWN BROTHER, I love it. Just imagining Yukio really caring for Rin (because honestly in the anime and manga, he's more the exorcist than the brother to Rin) it makes me so happy ! Thanks