| Reviews for Eclipse of the Sun |
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   Caver Floyd chapter 7 . 6/25 Another interesting start to a story with good potential. Hope to see it continued eventually. |
| Caver Floyd chapter 4 . 6/25 This chapter has the mother of all darkly humorous typos in it. "a stuffed peasant that had been shot by the hunting party earlier" I assume that is supposed to be pheasant. I hope the Daynes are not in the habit of eating their smallfolk for supper. lol |
| Codi chapter 1 . 9/21/2019 Really good storyline I would love to see you do an Arya/Oberyn story |
| amerdism chapter 7 . 9/4/2019 Awesome story. I hope to see more soon. When’s the next chapter going up? |
| SunshineBubbles chapter 7 . 8/2/2019 Nice story please update soon |
| Valen Goncalvez chapter 7 . 4/2/2019 I... Physically can't WAIT for the next chapter! PS: Male Daenerys x Fem Jon (Lyarra) pleaseee! |
| Valen Goncalvez chapter 2 . 4/2/2019 male daenerys x lyarra |
| Hearteyesmf chapter 7 . 3/12/2019 This story is fantastic, I love seeing Lyarra build a life in Dorne and especially enjoy her bonding with Oberyn and the Sand Snakes. In future chapters I look forward to revisiting Winterfell so Catelyn can see what an awesome lady Lyarra turned into. Also I love your other Lyarra/Robb story and I’m hoping something similar may happen between the two in this story. They would make a great couple and Catelyn would be furious which is always a plus. Romance is probably pretty far off in this story, but I’m still looking forward to Lyarra’s many suitors. Willas, Quentyn, and Aegon all three seem like especially great candidates if Robb is out. Can’t wait to read the rest of this story, update soon please! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/15/2019 I don't think an eight year old can write so well, but otherwise, love the story. Please do update. It's really tragic when a story as promising is abandoned. |
| beserkerbeast chapter 7 . 12/13/2018 love to see more BB |
| Krysania chapter 7 . 11/15/2018 LOVELY! |
| Squidgod812 chapter 7 . 11/14/2018 nice |
| Carol542 chapter 7 . 11/11/2018 Love it please continue this story soon I really really like it |
| FANactic Writer chapter 7 . 11/10/2018 Love the fic!~ |
| zeyreele chapter 2 . 10/23/2018 Is it too late to suggest pairings? since she’s in dorne she could be with edric dayne instead of gerold? it’d be interesting bc in canon edric believes he knows who jon snow’s mother is (even if its not confirmed if that actually is his mother), they might bond over a story arc when the lies get exposed and everyone is trying to find out what the truth is or aegon, as in rhaegar and elia’s son. This would be more interesting and a more flexible pairing i think, plus i think it’d be nice if through lyarra(who they falsely assume is a close relative) they get aegon, elia’s son! it’d be kind of poetic and it’ll even things out nicely so that the martell’s still get their long lost family member, even if it’s not who they thought it would be. Plus, gotta deal with lyarra’s actual parentage and all that comes with it somehow! thrones and all ;) |
