Wrong age and time! This story should be taking place during Ultimate Alien!

Good that Primus was able to talk some sense into Natalie.

Very intersting backstory of Megatron and Orion.

I wonder if your backstory for Natalie's people was partially inspired by my story where magic users are also from another world who fled there when their home-world became uninhabitable due to misuse of powers. I obviously like that idea.

I loved Ben's and Gwen's little competition (they love each other, but they're still competitive, it's very in-character), and the fight against Megatron. Great work!

And another great chapter congrats

BWEN Forever

Great action-packed chapter!
So Natalie wants to take down Primus? That's definitely going to be interesting! I'm loving Natalie as kind of the villain here.
And of course, Ben and Gwen still have to worry about Megatron

And another great chapter congrats

BWEN Forever

And another great chapter congrats

BWEN Forever

I liked to see Ben standing up to Natalie, very well done. I also liked the idea that Gwen's magic comes from her mother's side of the family.

"You won't like me when I'm Four Arms" I think that was inspired by the Hulk XD

Are Ben and Natalie going to call a truce to save Gwen?

Interesting! I really liked the developments in this chapter

A very interesting turn of events. I like how you handled everyone's reaction to the kiss; also your portrayal of Natalie.
As always, I'll be waiting for more.

The training scene was very cool! Loved to see the Back With A Vengeance revisited here.
The kiss was awesome as well.

Uh-oh, Natalie... I guess she will cause troubles to Ben's and Gwen's relationship

And another great chapter congrats

BWEN Forever

Great fight scene. Very well written and a great display of how perfectly they coordinate.
Of course the kiss, with everyone watching was an awesome moment.

Can't wait to find out what happens with Natalie now.

Awesome chapter. Always good to see professor retcon...I mean paradox, killed.

Oh, so you made Primus from Transformers and Primus the planet from UAF into the same being, that's a clever twist!

I'm glad that Ben and Gwen have similar forms now.

Ben and Gwen will bond at some point, that's great!

Good that Grandpa Max was able to find them.

Nice developments!

WTF did I just read?