Cute 3 I like the way you write!

So my favorite part of this fic is that Emma gets to do the big romantic guesture - & it feels natural, in line for how you wrote her character & their story in this one. Thanks for writing & posting

this is one of my favorite fics. i’m not having a good day today but rereading this story has made me feel better a little. thank you for writing it ️

This was lovely. It had the calibre of a multi chapter in the simplicity of a one shot. Would love it if it were to be continued... I'm sure I'm not alone in that thought! Thanks for writing it.

Great story! Was actually surprised by the last minute switch at the end!

Wow! I loved this! Poor Killian. He always has to help her see the light. But he does it so well. I loved the pebbles at her window.

Wow. This had me smiling, crying, oh noing in angst. What a rollercoaster of emotions. You worked their relationship from secret to I love you real so beautifully, I loved it.

Oh man, I loved this so much. I'm going to go check out your other stuff next. I really loved how this was written. Very in character for everyone, but this had a distinct writing style. I was all about it. And what a great concept! Just A over all. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us! -(it won't let me log in but this is stubble-sandwich)

This was adorable! I totally didn't expect the ending. Thank you for this!

“...Dizzy with love. Dizzy with an imbalance of the inner ear.”

That sums up why I love your stories. They go from heart eyes to belly laughs in one sentence.

I remembered I never left a review here and that's unforgiveable on such a wonderful story. As usual, there are at least 10 places in here where I stopped to go " she did it again with her turn of phrase." at LEAST 10 places. Every little detail is perfect, every word choice is perfect, the banter (your amazing speciality) is spot on, and on top of that, you always write a fun story. I bow to your skill. You're amazing.

This is superb! I loved the lighthearted moments and the emotional confrontations. I loved Killian for giving it all up and Emma for being the same - there's too little of Emma putting Killian first in fanfics. This was extremely well done! Thank you!

Loved this ! Thank you

This was an absolute delight to read! I love that what seemed to be a harmless prank war escalated into something that forced them to admit their feelings for each other, and I think the choice Emma made at the end was a smart one. Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us!

That was so cute! So creatively written and well done. And she even remembered the flowers at the end! I love this universe so much! Care to continue this? You're a great writer :)