Ok so I know I'm reading this way after it was started but just from reading this chapter. Oh, boy, I know its going to me a good one. I love your style of writing. Even if you don't see this, I hope you continue writing. It feels every professional. I almost forgot I was reading a fanfiction! Hope you are well.

I love your portrayal of Hardrian, I just can't get enough of it!

Ah. You are a Britain shithead, that explains a lot.

If Harry wasn’t a murderous, raping monster who deserved to be neglected and hated, I would really enjoy this story. The author is a good writer when it comes to story, dialogue and character development. It’s just that Harry is an evil villain. If you like the evil Harry who is just as bad a Voldemort plot then this story is a good read. If you don’t care for that then you will be disappointed. I do look forward to future stories by this author. If he writes Harry as good and likable, if not ruff around the edges, then it should be a very good story.

This fkin story holy fuck like I felt so absorbed is the word this Hadrian is fkin so attractive like I felt myself pullled by him as well like he was speaking to me this was great

Not my type of story, but you seem to be succeeding fairly well at what you're attempting, so props on that at least.

"the bullet"?

This is so ridiculously edgy. You write like the most teenagery teenager ever.

Draco, you don't want the answer.

Thanks for the update. please please update soon.

There are a few things I can't figure out. So Hadrian is going into 5th year. What year is his brother Daniel in. Also is Draco and the Slytherin from cannon in the same year as Hadrian or has Daniel already started and in the same year as them. What year is Percy in or has he just finished school.

And no. You write well but I don't go for yaoi and/or bisexual theme's.

I really wish you’ll update it soon! Great story!

lol when I read dumbles was spying I said well shit,but the story is great please continue!

Chapter 9 is a copy of chapter 8.