This was a very story I enjoyed it very much thank you for writing it

No real biggie, but unless you have changed timelines, you had a 10 year old Harry, born on 1980, and Vernon Dursley driving a 1999 Vauxhall in 1990. I'm so confused. tazdad47

This is by far the worst plot to a story I have ever read. There was no true antagonist. The plot was all over the place, you seem to think readers enjoy reading a story with the same(or basically) encounters happening over and over again. You rated it M which was completely unnecessary.

Overall, I like multiple of the plots you opened up such as the OCxHarry pairing, and having Harry bash Ginny and Ron, but you soon remedied those plot lines so they weren’t expanded on.

I don’t mean to put don’t you or your story as I know how it feels to have a story you spent hours on mocked, but your plot needs some work.

I don’t know when this was published, so it is quite possible you have improved drastically since the completion of this story, if so, I apologize.

Thank you for sharing this interesting work.

Thanks for sharing your work.

This is what happens when you don't take care of enemies and leave them to attack you again.

If Harry was smart he would ask about other schools and ask for a way so he can't be forced to Hogwarts if Dumbledore is there. That is something ive never come across where Harry refuses to go to Hogwarts if Dumbledore is there, hell that would be a good revenge fic especially if Snape was part of the embargo also.

I liked it that Ginny and Ron apologized, and Harry is actually giving them a chance to prove themselves. That is nice of him. It is too bad Harry had to miss the party, but good that he got to see Karley again. Dudley and Gang getting exactly what they deserve! Good call. Another good chapter, well done.

I did see the movie big fat liar. It was pretty funny. Glad to see Harry’s ‘relatives’ (ok, tormentors) get what they deserved. Did Harry actually use the torture curse “Cruicio”? Sorry to see Harry actually get shot. I hope he recovers. I suspect Katie and Karley are going to be upset. Another good chapter.

All due respect...the Dursley’s are too cartoony her

"You've eluded us, for the last... tiiiiiimeeee.”

Great story thank you for sharing

This was a very good fluff chapter after so much drama. Harry deserves a bit of happiness. It was nice to see Harry get a real Christmas party. Glad that Harry got closer to Karley. I enjoyed the scene with Harry and Tori too. Of course, I am especially glad the Dursley’s will finally get what is coming to them. Good chapter overall.

At first, I thought Dumbledore knew exactly what kind of treatment Harry received from the Dursleys and simply didn’t care. Glad to see he does at least on some level. Another good chapter.

I never read the other fic involving Zander, so I didn’t know what to expect. I am glad Harry found another ally and I hope his plan to put the Dursely’s in their place works and Harry never has to go back to them. Another good chapter.

it's good