PLEASE UPDATE I AM BEGGING YOU. THIS IS A TERRIBLE WAY TO END I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT

This is one of the best fanfics I have read and probably one of my favorites. Are you going to have more chapters or is this the end? Please don’t let it be the end.

Spot is making me sooooo mad!

I counted 28 ow's.

Also, you are a great writer and the story was super real. I loved Race with the little girl. That was really sweet. Thank you so much for writing this. I loved it.

I think Snyder and his goons just punched my HEART. I loved this a lot and the brotherly side of Jack. I like how you portrayed Spot and how even friends fight all the time. Especially before they are best friends. I'm crying right now and please keep writing this! 3

This was so good! I felt like I was right there with them! I could almost see the anger in Spot's eyes or hear the fear in Race's voice. This was really impressive! You have a talent for writing, so I hope you'll continue! I need to know what happens next!
Thanks for the story!
~A fan from Montana.

This was amazing and I can't wait to read the rest!

Please update soon

please update !

please update !

please update. this story is amazing and i would love to read more. please update

I am so glad that the Spot is taking care of Racetrack. I like the leader of the Brooklyn newsies, he sure put Stripes in his place. I hope that Race will stay put with Spot until they can figure out if Jack is out of the refuge. Looking forward to the next chapter.

So good as always! I can’t wait for the next update!

Aww! I love this story so much! I can’t wait for what happens next! I hope Jack gets out soon and takes Race home. The poor kids. I love them so much