Reviews for The Wager |
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tsunamicats chapter 4 . 12/8/2019 Hehehe. I liked the part with the brain. Good storytelling. Thanks! |
Suzululu4moe chapter 4 . 10/18/2018 Too bad he doesn’t have like a demon pet of some kind for blood disposal. Though if he were to remove the body parts from pierce he could probably feed a pet baby shark or a pet pirianah . Well at least he is a well known sexual connoisseur who owns a night shop full of strippers so buying tarps for orgies from adult shops or having it show on his credit card records won’t seem alarming. |
Suzululu4moe chapter 3 . 10/18/2018 Oh Chloe there are ways a persons neck n head can be sore in the adult way. I guess she never experimented that with dan . |
Suzululu4moe chapter 2 . 10/18/2018 Makes sense . Demons cease to exist when dead . Angels are like pre fallen Amandiel. He could go wild with pierce. Lol his new kink I wonder if he could use the stuff somehow . |
Suzululu4moe chapter 1 . 10/18/2018 Nice start. |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/18/2018 I’m loving this so far! Keep up the good work. I really ship Marcus/Lucifer and there is barely any fanfiction for them and this one is one of the better ones I have read :) |
Caringheart chapter 3 . 3/6/2018 These two, what a pair! Good writing. |
Magnira chapter 3 . 2/21/2018 Yes! I love it! Very playful and sexy. I need more Lucifer/Marcus in my life |
FluffyGlitterPantsDragon chapter 3 . 2/15/2018 Can I offer a critique? "It's your choice" Sounds passive aggressive (to me). Chloe's still trying to get into his pants, so I think she'd leave off with something a little friendlier, like "Well, If you need to talk to someone without a devil complex, I'm always available." type thing. Otherwise I can't wait to see how this turns out! |
Falbala03 chapter 1 . 2/11/2018 Ah génial! J'avais envie de voir ces deux-là ensemble depuis l'épisode 13, malheureusement il n'y a que peu de fictions sur le sujet. Et avec Chloé en plus je pense que ça va être génial! Hâte de voir la suite, ça à l'air prometteur! |
snowdrop65 chapter 1 . 1/31/2018 Lucifer will win. Not my opinion, just a fact. |