Reviews for Twin Brother Bounding
Guest chapter 7 . 4/4
Aww this is very wholesome! (灬º‿º灬)
Guest chapter 7 . 8/7/2019
Hi,
I enjoyed your story! It was fun to read.
ReaderFreak5000 chapter 4 . 10/5/2018
This looks to be an interesting story. However the chapters are kinda short...maybe they could be a little bit longer?
crafordbrian17 chapter 1 . 6/9/2018
To Empv:
I was hoping you could make a story where Agnes gets knocked out one of the windows of Dru's mansion and falls into the ocean below. Edith gets blamed for the accident but they never get a chance to find her because that evening, Agnes comes back covered in a couple pieces of seaweed and she gets into a wrestling fight with Edith(because it really was her fault) but Margo comes by to break it up.
1. The reason Agnes fell out the window was because a machine with a robotic arm knocked her out of it.
2: Edith caused the machine to malfunction, that's why it knocked Agnes out the window.
3: when Agnes and Edith fight, make it intense. No blood though.
Crawford 1722 chapter 1 . 3/22/2018
I have an idea for a story called Margo's Giant Problem. Margo and her sisters are outside in Gru's front yard when Edith notices a bean on the sidewalk. Edith dares Margo to eat the bean and Margo somehow accepts the challenge. Margo pops the bean into her mouth and starts to feel a little strange. Suddenly Margo starts to grow 3 inches per second. When she is done growing, she's almost half the size of the house. Margo tells Edith and Agnes that she doesn't want anyone else to see her like this so she tries to crawl in the house through the front door. She is halfway in but she gets jammed at her hips. So Edith and Agnes come up behind her and push her through pressing into the fabric of her skirt. The rest is up to you. Please do this story!
multyfangirl21 chapter 2 . 3/22/2018
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these chapters are really short, and there's some potential to the story but it'll go to waste if you don't finish this story.