| Reviews for The Angel Becomes a Devil |
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  Dontay chapter 9 . 10/14/2018 I need more |
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/7/2018 Please make more |
 AzureTemplar3535 chapter 9 . 8/27/2018 This was a pretty good story. What Ray said to her father was true , the duels where all good. The little talk between Zarc and the other boys where good. This from a friendly Secptor. |
| fangs of death chapter 9 . 5/9/2018 Interesting story. |
| Marson chapter 9 . 4/6/2018 This was good, though I wouldn't spell out the reference to Akiza like you did; its distracting and takes you out of the story. |
| Royal2 chapter 9 . 4/3/2018 Poor yugo. |
| Marson chapter 8 . 4/1/2018 Got to say, not a fan of the idea that Yuto would let Ruri beat him, ever. That's disrespecting her abilities as a duelist and he loves her too much to do something like that. |
| Royal2 chapter 8 . 3/23/2018 Good duel |
| Marson chapter 7 . 3/12/2018 Your dueling action and descriptions are improving. Keep at it. |
| Royal2 chapter 7 . 3/9/2018 That will be an interesting duel. |
| duskrider chapter 6 . 3/2/2018 Interesting start to the final events. |
| Marson chapter 5 . 2/23/2018 Looking good so far. Keep it up. |
| DKILAM chapter 5 . 2/23/2018 Things are getting interesting here , Zarc is back and looks human instead of his dragon form. I love Ray and Yuya in this chapter , Ray for giving the doctor what he deserves and Yuya for knocking some sense into Leo for causing this whole mess to begin with, very satisfying indeed . I can't wait to Leo reaction seeing Zarc alive and well |
| Rayisoar5 chapter 4 . 2/18/2018 Finally, someone who makes a story where Ray is the villain, it was about time. Good Work |
| Marson chapter 4 . 2/14/2018 I feel like what you really need to work on is your descriptions of actions, and whenever a monsters attack power changes, you should have a line of text by itself showing the old attack power and the new attack power so that it becomes easier to follow. Look forward to seeing how all this plays out. |
