Oh, goddamn it, this was adorable!

Sorry this is late. I know this is over two months late, but I still wanted to leave a comment.

This was so cute! I couldn't stop the smile at the cooking song. The song was so silly. I don't like egg or spinach, so I wasn't enthusiastic about the recipe. But obviously, Tamazo (and Devi) influenced the decision.

Aww at Charo organizing the potluck. I can definitely see him having a knack for the domestic chores. I'm sure his dish(es) would turn out delicious.

Tamazo and Devi were so cute. Of course Tamazo was hyper with all the eggs around. He wanted to help, and he ended up making a mess. He's a force to be reckoned with in the kitchen. I couldn't help but laugh as Tamazo looked in the fridge for a snack. That sounded like him. Poor Tamazo. Ace certainly found a way to get back at him for everything. I felt bad for Devi, though. He didn't do anything wrong, but he was forced to listen to the song too. Devi asking Lance if he wanted to call off the engagement was cute. That sounded like him. I enjoyed Tamazo and Devi's interactions. Tamazo was cute with the chef hats, and I smiled as Tamazo placed a purple one on Devi's head and said that Lance didn't need one. Tamazo was definitely on 'Team Lance' for the day, and I loved how he embarrassed Ace by mentioning that Ace practiced all night to impress Lance. Speaking of which, the image of Ace practicing all night to impress Lance is so cute!

There were so many parts I loved! I really love how you write Ace and Lance. Ace being serious and giving 'cooking lessons' to Lance was so cute. I literally went "aww" out loud at Lance accepting a mission that involved helping a child find his lost monster. I just love how he has a soft spot for children. I remember he gave his mizu manju to that kid in canon and how he was smiling at the kid's reaction. I believe Lance will be an amazing father in the future. Taking Ace to a hotel and giving him an expensive ring to propose... He is so romantic. And aww at Ace thinking he would've accepted even if Lance gave him a quarter machine ring. Ace is adorable, getting worked up and flustered at thinking of Lance arriving and at all of his loving actions and words. Ace singing along and dancing to the cooking song was so silly, but it made me smile. I couldn't stop the laugh at his reaction when he found out Lance had watched him. It was great how Tamazo made Ace take off Lance's cloak, and Lance's reaction to Ace taking it off for him was so cute. Of course Lance would smirk and feel smug at Ace flushing because of his choice of words. Lance was definitely thinking some naughty thoughts. I also love how Ace has a knack for cooking and knitting. He's going to be great at domestic life when they are married. It was nice to see all the kisses. Not only did we get steamy kisses, but we got the soft and sweet kisses as well. They certainly couldn't keep their hands off of each other. I love how in love both of them are with each other, and I love how you wrote them as fiancés in this. I also really liked how they worked together on the recipe in this. I mentioned before that I don't like egg or spinach, but the way they made it and how you wrote it made it sound delicious. The ending was really cute. It seemed like a bit of a tease, though.

Aaaaaa, this was such a fluffy and adorable prompt! It was really cute and really good! Wonderful job! When I have time, I'll definitely reread the next prompt and leave a comment.

Sorry this is late. I've been busy with college.

Aah, this was a such a fluffy prompt (besides the small dark part near the end) and really cute! Beach episodes are always fun. I'm not a beach person either, but I enjoy beach episodes. That little author's note about Charo is adorable. I can definitely imagine Charo doing and saying that to his parents. Mhm, Torlie and the chef had good chemistry. I wouldn't be surprised if they started to get to know each other better after what happened and start dating.

Garnet was so beautiful in this prompt. I really love how you wrote her. I love how blunt she was with Ace and Charo, but she also showed her soft side and trained with Charo to make it up to him. Flustered!Ace is so cute, and I loved his reaction to Garnet's double entendre. I just love how your Garnet gets frustrated with Ace (and Lance) and pushes them together. I wasn't too surprised when Garnet sent a message to Lance. Her 'message' made me laugh. I've tried that trick to get rid of a brain freeze before, but it never works for me. It is frustrating. I couldn't help but laugh when Garnet said being stupid was an Ace and Lance thing. Garnet teasing Ace and Lance as they left was great. And of course, Garnet has to interrupt their alone time to force them to come to her concert. That is just like her.

Charo is adorable. His crush on Torlie is cute. It must be frustrating, wanting to hurry up and grow older. I think a lot of people (and children) can relate to that feeling. Charo's reaction to Garnet's teasing made me smile and how he accidentally said he wanted to live with Torlie. He quickly realized his mistake, but his honesty was so cute. I felt sad at Charo's reaction when Charo mentioned Torlie was dating that chef. Charo ;A; It must be very difficult for him.

Tiger is always a lot of fun. He makes me smile with a lot of his antics. I laughed when Tiger told Ace that he should invite Lance to the concert and that it would rekindle the spark. It is just like him to get a brain freeze. I loved it when Tiger and Tamazo teamed up to push Ace towards Lance.

Tamazo and Devi were so cute. Aww, Ace spoiled Tamazo and felt bad for yelling at him. It is just like Tamazo to challenge Tiger to an ice cream eating contest. It is a little bad, but I smiled when Tamazo messed up the word 'catering'. We didn't get any Tamazo and Devi interactions this time, but I enjoyed the little moments they were together. I found it cute how Devi played tag with Tamazo and Ouka. I loved it when Lance laughed at Devi's suggestion. I love it when Lance laughs. Was Flower plan A showing up with the flowers in person? That would've been cute to see.

There were so many parts that I loved! Ace missing his boyfriend and getting frustrated was so cute. I enjoyed Ace's interactions with Garnet. She certainly likes to tease him. You mentioned your headcanon about Ace calling Lance 'that guy' whenever he gets too flustered over him before, and I find it cute how Ace does it when he is upset as well. A stranger (or someone who doesn't know him well enough) would think he was being disrespectful, though. Haha. Garnet telling Ace that he melts at Lance's gaze and that he was bad at lying and hiding the hickey was so good and cute. I loved Ace's honesty. He is a terrible liar. Ace talking about how Lance would be jealous if he knew about his crush on the older mail delivery boy is so cute. It would be nice to see a jealous Lance, though.

Aww, Lance is such a sweetheart! I love how Lance was so affectionate with Ace (even in front of their friends). Lance looking at Ace with a lovestruck look and telling Ace that he missed him was so good and cute! I let out a sad "aww" at Lance missing Ace's hand's warmth. It was really sad that Lance didn't message Ace, but it is understandable after what Lance went through. That poor kid ;A; At least the kid is with his family now. I hope they rest in peace. Lance is so sweet, not wanting to worry Ace. And it was just like Ace to want to be there for Lance and watch out for him. When Lance asked for permission to kiss Ace, I literally went "aww" out loud. It was nice to see all the kisses. Not only did we get steamy kisses, but we got the soft and tender kisses as well. I feel that Lance would definitely have a protective and possessive side to him when it comes to Ace. Haha. Lance is definitely an opportunist. Also, I went "aww" at Lance's note to Ace. What a sweet confession! Ace is going to be smiling for days thanks to that.

Wonderful job! When I have time, I'll definitely read the next prompt and review again.

This was so cute, emotional, and good! I think it was a great idea to make it a special meteor shower. Asking Ace out on a night like that... Lance is so romantic! I just love how everyone seems to think that Lance has a romantic side to him. I'll definitely write Lance being romantic when I have time.

I think it is obvious by now, but I have a soft spot for Tamazo and Devi (especially when they are in each other's company). I enjoyed their interactions. They are so cute. I loved how serious Devi was and how he was easily able to say that it was a matter of the heart. Tamazo kept making me smile and laugh throughout this whole thing. Taking Ace's money and spending it on food sounds just like Tamazo. I loved how he teased Ace and mentioned that it was a date. It was great how he said it was a date in Lance's presence. And of course, it flustered Ace (which is always nice to see).

I think Haru and Rena were great and in character. I love how they were pointing out Ace's feelings for Lance and making him feel flustered. I did feel a little bad for Ace, though. Poor boy couldn't even voice his rival's name. And of course, I love how Rena was pointing out that it was a date and that Lance has a romantic side to him.

Ace and Lance though... These boys will be the death of me. Seriously, there were so many parts in here that I loved! Ace dressing up for his 'meeting' with Lance and thinking Lance looked good in his normal outfit was great. Lance touching Ace casually and admitting that he was looking for Ace was so good! Garnet was her normal self. It was just like her to message Lance about Ace and meddle in their relationship. Lance was so smooth when he asked Ace out. Also, he was so cute when he laughed at Devi telling them not to be late. Lance carrying Ace after the battle and letting him know that he can contact him if he needs anything was so sweet. Lance being a tsundere after he offered his hand was so cute. And the 'meeting' itself was wonderful!

Lance would definitely catch Ace if he fell (and not mind a bit). Ace being drawn in by Lance's laughter was so cute. I love how Lance noticed Ace's staring. Lance was so vulnerable and sincere with Ace. I'm glad he was able to show a vulnerable side of him to Ace. And showing that vulnerable side seemed to help since he confessed to Ace how he felt about him. The confession was so sweet and sincere. I was smiling the whole time and trying not to cry (especially when Ace started crying with Lance). Aah, my two boys! I'm so happy for them. The 'idiot' pet name definitely sounds like something Lance would do. And those soft and tender kisses were so sweet. When Ace teased Lance about not going to wish and Lance's response was that Ace was already there... I literally went "aww" out loud. Only Lance could say something like that so easily.

Wonderful job! I can't wait to see your next prompt!

This was so cute! That was such a cute idea to make it an Ouka onesie that Ace is proud of. I can imagine him wearing it. He would look so cute in that! I wasn't too surprised when Lance wasn't wearing an onesie, but I do think it was cute how he was wearing a shirt that had a Bubblie on it. It is too bad Ace didn't get to meet an Ouka, but they are rare. Plus, he'll see and befriend one when he becomes a Dragon Caller in the future. He just has to wait a little bit.

I really love how you wrote Ace and Lance. I think you wrote them well. I love how loud and energetic Ace is. And of course, I can't forget about how his dream is to become the greatest Dragon Caller. I wonder if Ace would forget about his dream in this AU? Maybe he would forget it, and meeting up with Lance again makes him remember? Haha. Sorry. I got a little carried away. I also really love how you incorporated the start of their rivalry. Also, can I just say that Ace messing up 'play date' made me smile? Wow, Ace. Thinking about romance even as a kid, huh? To be fair, he thinks it's gross, but he still thought about something romantic.

Aww! Lance looking out for Ace and showing him how to feed the monsters. Their conversation by the pond was so sweet and cute. My heart hurt at Lance's pain when remembering Devi, but I'm glad Ace was there to reassure him that they would meet again. I really think you nailed Lance's personality. He has that wariness/hesitance about him, and while he was wary around Ace (especially after the 'pretty' compliment), I was so happy to see him talk to Ace more and warm up to him. Speaking of the 'pretty' compliment... That part made me laugh. Ace has that honest and straightforward personality even as a kid, so it is only natural that he would compliment Lance like that. And of course, he was taught that by his mom. Kid!Ace is so cute! My smile wouldn't leave my face as they kept holding hands. It is such an innocent, pure, and sweet gesture, but I always love it when my favorite pairing holds hands.

I also think you did a great job with Angine and Rena. Their comments and actions were in character. It is too bad that Ace didn't get to meet Vahaton. That meeting would've been fun to see. Maybe even Lance could've been present for the introduction? Or adding it in at the end would've been interesting, too. Vahaton would've seen them holding hands.

The innocent and pure kiss at the end was so cute and sweet! That was so Lance, taking control like that. Flustered!Ace is always so cute, and this time, we got flustered!kid Ace.

This was so fluffy and so good! I can't wait to see your next prompt!

Happy Esuran Week! I'm so happy you are writing the prompts. I really love how you are participating in Esuran Week, and I'm already looking forward to reading the future prompts.

This was such a cute one shot! It was a bit of a tease chapter, though.

I enjoyed the little bit we got about Tamazo and Devi. Those two are so cute, and I enjoy their interactions.

I can't get enough of your Ace and Lance. They are so cute, and I love how you write them and their relationship. It is also really sweet and cool how you decided to write them as newlyweds in this. Ooh, I wonder which animated series is Ace's favorite? I couldn't help but laugh as Lance kept getting distracted by Ace and didn't watch the movie. That is so Lance. I love how the matching pajama sets were a wedding gift from Charo. That sounds like something Charo would do.

I love how affectionate these two are to each other. You can really tell how much they love each other. This was just really sweet. And of course, Lance would feel tempted to do something... mature after Ace flirted with him like that. It is just like Ace to want to get revenge for all of the times Lance made him flustered. They are rivals after all, and I love how you didn't forget about that aspect of their relationship. Those kisses were so passionate! What a nice little make out session. I also loved all of the innocent kisses and touches.

This was so fluffy and so good! I can't wait to see your next prompt!