I love this story a lot

I absolutely adore this, its spot on and very interesting

LOVE ITTTTTTTTTT

I love this! Your so talented!

Good story!
Please update.

OwO? What's this? An update?

This is really good :DD

This is super cool and support well made! I really admire the work you've done here. Thanks!

Heyo, you made a few mistakes regarding spanish:
- “Están dragones en el torneo” would probably be better off as “Hay dragones en el torneo”
- “Son el tontos” should be changed to “Son tontos”. El is singular, thus it shouldn’t come before tontoS.
- The Spanish equivalent of ADHD is TDAH but we usually call it Déficit de Atención despite that technically only referring to ADD (in case you wanted to add that after “lo siento”)
- It’s “¿Cómo te llamaS?” or “¿Cuál es tu nombre?”
- Instead of “¿Eres los dos fresas?”, use “¿Son fresas?”. Eres is singular, and “Son los dos fresas” implied you’re talking about THE rich kids, like it’s a title or something.
- “¿Solo dijo fresas?” technically translates to “He only said strawberries?” which is correct, just not in this context. I recommend “¿Acaba de decir fresas?” or “¿Dijo fresas?”

I’m really sorry if this comes across as rudeness or anything, I just thought it’d be best to have correct Spanish.

Error in transcribing Greek.
"Ω δρακον! Nάν δυδ αίλκ άκιερε μισσ,"
[Pronunciation: O drakon! Non didlkai kari miss!
Actually is O dragon! Nan dud ailk akiere miss
What you had under pronounciation would have been
Ω δρακον! Μόνο διδλκαι καρι μισά!

I'm really interested in founding out that how much stronger Leo is (is he?), ahshdh, I love it! I hope you'll continue soon.

please update this! I love it!

Excellent

I'm learning Spanish, so that was helpful!

Oh my got this is amazhang