Nice job! I look forward to seeing more stories.

I love this history.
In this story i look the cute site of primus.

And Optimus is cute when is smile.

Thank you so much, amigo! This was a very well written story. I'm sorry to not send requests to you about writing one because you said you can only write once a week and I am worried that I might pressure you to the point.

Anyway, I love this one. So far, this reminds me of another fan-author who also wrote Optimus being an extremely ticklish Autobot in almost everywhere. It's just... pfthahahahhahahaha! i always love stories that involves him being tickled to the pits of laughter and fun.

I extremely love this. Keep up the good work. Great job. Thanks :) (First comment ever!... I think.)

Primus a true and amazing father and creator.

AN OUTSTANDING AND INSPIRATIONAL STORY FROM AN EQUALLY STUPENDOUS AUTHOR!