I like the concept you have here, we often see stories like this being siths coming to the world, so it’s refreshing g having a Jedi instead. I do however have a few questions. Does everyone know about the Jedi? They really seem unbothered that Edric just crashed on their planet. Also, why was Arya in the chambers? Is there any significance for it? I found it really weird to be completely honest. I feel as though you could have gotten the same effect by having some random servant there, and it would actually be more believable. Also also, did Ned just tell his biggest secret to a random guy he literally just met?

Interesting story so far, keep up the good work.

All that we are surrounded by is fear and dead men.
Nice darth Vader quote

More please

GREAT

Edric you should think that if the war ends you can start a new Jedi order, you can not trust Yoda and Obi - Wan their old ideas are the cause of the extinction of the Jedi; If force brought you to this planet it is certain that soon I will send the same message to the other surviving Jedi. It is time for a new beginning for the Jedi Order, accepting emotions and feelings is not bad you just have to learn not to let them control you; for something brought strength to this planet there are still jedi vios in the galaxy and this planet can be their new home for them. This is why it is important to end the war soon and crown Jon as the king of the 7 kingdoms.

I miss this story and good job anyway. *Thumbs UP!*

Let him live of course

Mmm interesting story hope to see a Jedi fight but I think he should start by using a Steel sword as a weapon not his Lightsaber because he would stand out enough with his Jedi moves and Force enhanced reflexes and a lightsaber would cut through anything plus he already can use the force so I think his lightsaber should be saved for the white walkers because just with the Force he can easily slaughter more than 100 knights. Now about Ned I think he should die in order to really set war of Five Kings in order to have the North become a kingdom anyway I hope your OC gets a Harem I can see him winning Sansa with his abilities as a fighter and since he is a Jedi Knight and I don’t think any Westerosi would know what a Jedi is she could think he is going to be her “Dragonknight” and if he saves her from Kings Landing he will surely have her fall for him now I can see him talking Arya as his new Padawan since he had a famele Padawan before and he may see her reflected in the little She Wolf this earning him Arya’s affection especially if while Jayne calls her Arya Horseface he trains her to fight and maybe even later in the way of the force he tells her she is beautiful and that she shouldn’t let anyone tell her otherwise anyway hope to read more. PS I don’t think Eddard would know what a Jedi Knight Is so maybe instead of asking his help as a Jedi to Guard his family he just asks for his vow as a Knight and tries to get him in service of House Stark anyway hope to see the next update soon

Lives

Do a full story please :)

I like it. And I support an OC.

I want to see more of this

This is interesting, nicely done

Wowsers! Please continue the story, the excitement thrills me!