great story but could you please separate it into more paragraphs, it was kind of hard to keep my spot; 4-5 sentences per paragraph is the usual you can go up to 8 if they are all fairly short, (as I got told when I was in English class and also creative writing class)

It was good

Nice story I just wished everything was spaced out and clumped up like a brick. But great story none the less.

nice story, my only real recommendation on it is to maybe break up the large blocks of text into smaller paragraphs?

the thought of Skull with the powers of a Halfa is right up there with things that would be funny as hell.

but over all, this is one hell of a fic that i enjoyed reading.

thanks for sharing!

Love this, although it's a tad bit confusing!

I am not going to lie I like the idea it surprised what was crossover with what.