Great story

I love this story

God man this chapter almost had me in tears because I know what it's like to go through suicidal thoughts

Great Job! I love the approach you took with Damions’ relationship with Kayla and how he comes to terms with God to some extent. I think this would be perfect for the actual story!

I really like the story. It's amazing and I might have felt the feels for this story.

Hope you create more.

This was an amazing fanfiction, I loved it! I hope you will make more!

BEAUTIFUL! I loved the whole thing! X3 Another great job, Kayla's POV and the music were amazing!

Also, thanks for the mention! That was very kind!

YAAAAAYYY, this was great. I really like Kayla's song, for i know it "Candlelight" which is one of Vivs videos/fan songs that someone made, but somehow i see her voice a bit differently when she sings. I dunno, but either way this was an awesome story. Hope to see more, also i know that this was Kayla's pov but i do wonder what their conversations were walking Damian was helping Kayla get home. But still, this was great, see you in the next story.

Hey, just wanted to say that this...this was beautiful. I loved every pit of this, in which to be honest i do care for Damian in which i know his struggles, him being judged, and a lot more. But, i don't hate him, for it's just that he needed to show more kindness in the comic then what he was given, in which that's all that i saw. But reading stories like this, i feel like they're better than the comic. Not that the comic is bad, it's cool but a lot of things need to be fixed in the comic and i'm glad that Viv is doing so ''Cough'' Not at the moment, or for even at least another year. ''Cough'' and is doing great so far. But still this was fantastic, in which like i said before i don't judge Kayla and Damian for i can see them (In stories) as friends or a couple if done well, and this is done fantastically well. I'm not saying this to suck up to anyone, i really do like this story. For if it's a one-shot, then it's great and that i hope you keep it up, if you're not sure what i mean by that just ask. But if this is a story, then i can't wait for more. Either way, this story is fantastic, for those who read the reviews first before the story and are reading this review, read this story for it's great. See you in chapter 3 of Unexpected.