Very powerful. Love the imagery and the second to last section was very well done you get a feel for everything that happened before without actually going into it.

I like how you add the loss of his friends to the mix it reminds me of uryuu after SS arc. His biternes is understandable. I am a little unclear are the dreams memory or fantasy?

A bit repetitive but that's how desperation is, after all...

Oh this one was so sad. Poor Ichigo. So heartbreaking... you can really feel his pain.

I love the "empty arms and empty heart" line that was lovely. And his "thoughtful" friends - ouch. And nice touch with comparing Shinji to the sun. Beautifully written. A few lines might need rewording due to word flow but other than that very well done.

*chants to self* I will not draw heirverse parallels I will not draw heirverse parallels...

Ouch, a sad one...

C'est très beau j'en ai les larmes aux yeux