So I’m guessing this is a hiatus?

Chapter 5 could really use a rewrite since the centaur was kinda intoduced out of nowhere

Pretty sure Smiths paperwork stake is the size of the empire state building by now.

Ya, I think I'm done with this. This story is kinda in a grey area with me in enjoyment. If there is no sex or stuff like that I would rather have the original MC. If there is then I want this one but you really don't really do anything except implying stuff and you never actually say that anything happened. It makes it feel like a cop-out for the T rating. Which I honestly think it is as you mentioned having to censor yourself multiple times. I would like this, but you don't actually do anything that enjoyable with it. It's just kind of a rushed romance with no actual drama. ~ciao

a single misspelled word and a punctuation mistake. other then that the only issue was it wasn't 10,000 words longer. seriously your a legend, and your chapters should be paid for

nooooo! why did it end? whyyyy. How dare u end it like this. I'm gonna need you to become immortal so u can write this story forever. gahhhh why did it enddd

more of mia's mom pls. or her clan. Also how's book 2 coming along? hope your doing ok

So far, you've proved that you can come up with an amazing story that seems better than the original writers. All I can say is that I hope you can consider trying to publish this, just hope the creator can allow you to do that. Good luck, and Happy writing. (When you try to give a nice comment and realize you are literally a random person on the Internet :P).

Well, its unfortunate that we didn't get any of the details that happened with any of the other characters during the huge battle, but the conclusion was still pretty good.

I still kind of feel like it wasn't the same story I started reading, but I liked the second story with all the supernatural battles and such better anyways.

As for ideas, couldn't you consider the Demons joining the Interspecies Exchange Program to be a peace treaty of sorts? All sorts of things you could do with that, radical factions that believe in isolationism, racial superiority, all sorts of Demons not interested in coexisting.

Well, you tried Sashenka.

Was funny how Mommy Demon backed off the second she realized Kayo was claimed, that's a MGE rule isn't it?

Fight was fun, but I hope we get to see or at least find out how the other fights went. Mostly Centorea and Rachnera, since I like them the most.

I don't want it to end! there better be another 10 whole books worth atleast! I love you mysterious writer person!

EXCITING! MORE PLEEZ!

That was a fun fight, leave it to the Demon to break the rules the second things stop going her way. I would have been disappointed if Kayo hadn't anticipated that.

By the way, I'm really hoping to see Centorea's fight. She's my favorite character in the series, and now she has a chance for a real sword fight.

Sashenka really shouldn't have been sent to negotiate. She's naive, appealing to a sense of glorious duty that has absolutely no reason to exist.

Guh! Amazing as ever!

MORE! MOOOOOOOAAAAAARRRRR! god man you should be famous! please make season 2 through 600! I love you!