I LOVE this! Cute baby erik feels so much for bonnie! poor sweet bonnie, such a pure heart! I really like the begining of the world building too, head mutant, secret inner world vs outside world and how magic works in with mutations! This is super cool, i would love to see more of this story! Erik all determined to find her and protect her and love her years in the future - totally single minded on it, planning in secret, researching any free moment he has to track her down and hold her once more. Are any other xmen characters going to show up? Logan, with his habit of adopting cute daughters, charles and his fascination with mutations and maybe magic too? Kai parker being interested in bonnie later and her not wanting to trust anyone the way she trusted erik, how it doesnt feel nearly the same level of emotion with kai as she did as a child with erik? Oh man, im getting myself so excited!

Really good start :-)

This story is interesting and I hope to see more soon

I never knew I needed this. Please write more. It’s amazing.

Thank u so much. I definitely see the potential in this